Response From Your Courtesan
What you do not see...53 total reviews
Comment from Supe
This is beautifully done and flows from start to finish. I like the fact that there is no punctuation, just one long read. I enjoyed this love poem. Compelling and heartfelt. The picture - perfect match.
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This is beautifully done and flows from start to finish. I like the fact that there is no punctuation, just one long read. I enjoyed this love poem. Compelling and heartfelt. The picture - perfect match.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from Gungalo
I crave the taste of your skin
on my tongue
and
the warmth and welcoming haven of
your arms
wrapped around mine
in the very best loving hug ever...
Certainly a word from the one who made him very happy. Will he in turn answer her. Sigh.
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I crave the taste of your skin
on my tongue
and
the warmth and welcoming haven of
your arms
wrapped around mine
in the very best loving hug ever...
Certainly a word from the one who made him very happy. Will he in turn answer her. Sigh.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
Comment from steevie
Your poem is a pleas for a long lost lover to respond to you, as you miss them with your whole mind and body.
You convey this emotion of longing very well, Jill
steve
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Your poem is a pleas for a long lost lover to respond to you, as you miss them with your whole mind and body.
You convey this emotion of longing very well, Jill
steve
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2013