I Don't Know Why
A Non-Fiction in about 800 words.Why it happens.............88 total reviews
Comment from mauial
A bucket list that's more a fantasy list as it would seem impossible for the average person to accomplish everything on it. We are made to experience many things but alas we never do all the things we would want to do because time is our enemy, for now at least.
  |
A bucket list that's more a fantasy list as it would seem impossible for the average person to accomplish everything on it. We are made to experience many things but alas we never do all the things we would want to do because time is our enemy, for now at least.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from EMB
Typically, when I think of someone's bucket list, I don't think of it as including literary aspirations. :) Still, I don't think it's out of the question. But when you launch into the beautiful girls, I'm thinking that this is musings of another nature.
|
Typically, when I think of someone's bucket list, I don't think of it as including literary aspirations. :) Still, I don't think it's out of the question. But when you launch into the beautiful girls, I'm thinking that this is musings of another nature.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from samandlancelot
Al,
I enjoyed visiting your dream world and how you ended it -- you don't know what happens or why your plans always get dismantled. Entertaining!
release my release my (delete extra 'my release') pet pigeons and parrots in the sky.
Patricia
|
Al,
I enjoyed visiting your dream world and how you ended it -- you don't know what happens or why your plans always get dismantled. Entertaining!
release my release my (delete extra 'my release') pet pigeons and parrots in the sky.
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
"...shall own a 6-storie (STORY) a... After 16 EVERY's my mind as a reviewer is mush unable to fATHOM any more of the same. Sounds like a 'bucket list' gone mad.
Regards:
|
"...shall own a 6-storie (STORY) a... After 16 EVERY's my mind as a reviewer is mush unable to fATHOM any more of the same. Sounds like a 'bucket list' gone mad.
Regards:
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from God's Writer
An excellent story written by an excellent poet. You kept my interest throughout the whole story, which is a feat by itself. I still suffer from ADHD which makes it hard for me to read much at all. I found that your professionalism in writing shows and is much appreciated.
|
An excellent story written by an excellent poet. You kept my interest throughout the whole story, which is a feat by itself. I still suffer from ADHD which makes it hard for me to read much at all. I found that your professionalism in writing shows and is much appreciated.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from chasennov
'I Don't Know Why.' I'm with you! I don't know why either, but I do wish that I knew, in fact I would give almost anything if I could know for sure. Well done.
|
'I Don't Know Why.' I'm with you! I don't know why either, but I do wish that I knew, in fact I would give almost anything if I could know for sure. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from ReaThomas
I really relate to this, for so many of these things are how I think as well. I suppose I shouldn't despair of my inability to get any of them done, since perhaps everyone feels the same way? Good piece, thanks for sharing.
|
I really relate to this, for so many of these things are how I think as well. I suppose I shouldn't despair of my inability to get any of them done, since perhaps everyone feels the same way? Good piece, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Whew! This almost-overwhelming piece is a clear indication of brain-overload and intentions gone out of control. I think there's some wry humor in here--Right?
|
Whew! This almost-overwhelming piece is a clear indication of brain-overload and intentions gone out of control. I think there's some wry humor in here--Right?
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Hope and dreams are often what keeps us going. I enjoyed reading your post.
Sometime I think I shall finish all my types of works, sit for reading books for hours and finalize cases on negotiations with people. (sometimes)
Someday I think I shall earn university degrees-titles, earn certificates on completing courses and training every year. (somedays)
Some other day I think I shall visit my target places, lands, countries, houses, families and new people and reply to all emails and messages (days)
|
Hope and dreams are often what keeps us going. I enjoyed reading your post.
Sometime I think I shall finish all my types of works, sit for reading books for hours and finalize cases on negotiations with people. (sometimes)
Someday I think I shall earn university degrees-titles, earn certificates on completing courses and training every year. (somedays)
Some other day I think I shall visit my target places, lands, countries, houses, families and new people and reply to all emails and messages (days)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from vapros
You have outlined the dreams and wishes of millions of other people, all at once. Even the currently popular multi-tasking could not manage them all, as you realize. The 'something else' you mention might be one of the items on your list. We all aspire to great things in our venues - some of us make it, and some do not. Make an agenda of possible achievements and work hard, It's all anyone can do. Be well.
|
You have outlined the dreams and wishes of millions of other people, all at once. Even the currently popular multi-tasking could not manage them all, as you realize. The 'something else' you mention might be one of the items on your list. We all aspire to great things in our venues - some of us make it, and some do not. Make an agenda of possible achievements and work hard, It's all anyone can do. Be well.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013