All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "As Trade Winds Sing"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Gungalo
We play, as children ... such a pair.
Like ocean's deep - our love affair
sustains us till this day's adieu.
I cast your ashes high into
the swirling skies, and two hearts tear -
as tradewinds sing.
So sad and so happy at the same time Sharyn. It's a forever loss except for the memories. SIgh.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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We play, as children ... such a pair.
Like ocean's deep - our love affair
sustains us till this day's adieu.
I cast your ashes high into
the swirling skies, and two hearts tear -
as tradewinds sing.
So sad and so happy at the same time Sharyn. It's a forever loss except for the memories. SIgh.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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thx so much Gungalo! :)S
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, visionary, you did an excellent job writing this rondeau poem, excellent imagery provided of love in the islands. i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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this is very well written, visionary, you did an excellent job writing this rondeau poem, excellent imagery provided of love in the islands. i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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Bless you sweets! :)Sharyn
Comment from Darkhorse555
as the song carries in your softest prayer the light of a heart shines in this wonderful outstanding piece I enjoyed your vision
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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as the song carries in your softest prayer the light of a heart shines in this wonderful outstanding piece I enjoyed your vision
Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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What a lovely review! Thank you so much!
:) Sharyn
Comment from kraefly
This flows really well! I like it a lot. It has a great sense of rhythm and melody as well. You should turn it into a song.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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This flows really well! I like it a lot. It has a great sense of rhythm and melody as well. You should turn it into a song.
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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thank you so much kraefly! :)Sharyn
Comment from lorijean
You always paint such a wonderful picture, a lovely poem, I just wanted to dive in, Nature it just wonderful, a great descriptive poem and thank you for sharing......
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You always paint such a wonderful picture, a lovely poem, I just wanted to dive in, Nature it just wonderful, a great descriptive poem and thank you for sharing......
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
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thx lj! I 'released' it by accident! yikes! :)))Sharyn