All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "It Makes Me Happy!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from J. Dark
The site won't let me six you Sharyn, but I'm tenning you in my heart - I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!! It has lifted my heart and poured sunshine into my day. You have named all my favourite shades of blue too! Absolutely wonderful. It is very rare to read a piece which will improve my mood for the day - this is one of those rare pieces. Thank you.
Kindest of uplifted regards,
Julie :-)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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The site won't let me six you Sharyn, but I'm tenning you in my heart - I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!! It has lifted my heart and poured sunshine into my day. You have named all my favourite shades of blue too! Absolutely wonderful. It is very rare to read a piece which will improve my mood for the day - this is one of those rare pieces. Thank you.
Kindest of uplifted regards,
Julie :-)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Bless you Julie - I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! :)))))))))S
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I more than enjoyed it, Sharyn - it has totally made my day! You are such a sparky and clever girl!! :-)
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a bright and cheerful poem, offering thanks for love and companionship. I liked this part best:
how many shades of blue
can there be in one joyous periwinkle day?
Smiles and winks!
CG
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This is a bright and cheerful poem, offering thanks for love and companionship. I liked this part best:
how many shades of blue
can there be in one joyous periwinkle day?
Smiles and winks!
CG
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thx so much CG - nothing not to love about blue, hmm? smiles & winks right back to you my dear! :)S
Comment from Bobbi22
It makes me happy too. How could anyone read this and not feel happy and good and blessed to have days such as this. I think we should all start singing now . . . maybe not - that might change the spirit of the day. Very well written and very happy poem.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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It makes me happy too. How could anyone read this and not feel happy and good and blessed to have days such as this. I think we should all start singing now . . . maybe not - that might change the spirit of the day. Very well written and very happy poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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thx so much RP! :)))Sharyn
Comment from Doc Holiday
Look who's happy! Your poem brings a smile to my face. We should be able to find happiness in simple things every day. We certainly know what pushes our buttons, so what can't we figure our what dings our bells!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Look who's happy! Your poem brings a smile to my face. We should be able to find happiness in simple things every day. We certainly know what pushes our buttons, so what can't we figure our what dings our bells!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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bless you doc - thx! :)Sharyn
Comment from yonashalom
This is such an exhilarating poem. It shouts for joy and happiness. I love the sounds of the words as they are read. Very clever how you present this. Awesome. Keep smiling. :) ~Yona
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This is such an exhilarating poem. It shouts for joy and happiness. I love the sounds of the words as they are read. Very clever how you present this. Awesome. Keep smiling. :) ~Yona
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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thx Yona - you too! :)S
Comment from ronnie k
Exception structure compliment by avery exceptional write of poetry. The graditude shown in line to line howls, I'm thankful, and gives the simple formilar for happyness and graditude. Thank you
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Exception structure compliment by avery exceptional write of poetry. The graditude shown in line to line howls, I'm thankful, and gives the simple formilar for happyness and graditude. Thank you
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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thx so much ronnie! :)Sharyn
Comment from Bryana
Hi dear visionary, Reading your poem gave a
wonderful feeling, several things makes you
happy, reading your poem made me happy as well.
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Hi dear visionary, Reading your poem gave a
wonderful feeling, several things makes you
happy, reading your poem made me happy as well.
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx so much Bryana! :)S
Comment from Glasstruth
Your poem is filled with wonderful colors as nature and you become one superfabulous scene. As it's been said you've got to stop and smell the roses, and you don't need a reason either. Your poem slides and slides down the screen with joyous ease. Great! Les
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Your poem is filled with wonderful colors as nature and you become one superfabulous scene. As it's been said you've got to stop and smell the roses, and you don't need a reason either. Your poem slides and slides down the screen with joyous ease. Great! Les
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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glad you liked this one Les - fun to write these! :)S
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. It has a nice playfulness to it as it dances along to its own rhythm. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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This is an interesting piece. It has a nice playfulness to it as it dances along to its own rhythm. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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THANK YOU MAI MAI! :)s
Comment from Gregory K Shipman
There are certain days when life is beyond beautiful and certain days when it's just beautiful... you've created one when it's beyond... so much beyond.
A incredibly descriptive one. You have washed me in the miracle of life... washed me in the beauty of the complexly simple things given to us free of charge... especially free when a visionary such as yourself gives me the magic carpet ride...
What a gift you are...
greg
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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There are certain days when life is beyond beautiful and certain days when it's just beautiful... you've created one when it's beyond... so much beyond.
A incredibly descriptive one. You have washed me in the miracle of life... washed me in the beauty of the complexly simple things given to us free of charge... especially free when a visionary such as yourself gives me the magic carpet ride...
What a gift you are...
greg
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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aaah, I was hoping you'd like this one Greg! yeah!! and, of course, a special big heaps thank you for your lovely six dear.
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I truly, truly loved it, Sharyn... and just thinking, if we all have another life after this one?... I'm available
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me too sweetheart - let's put application in new with the Big G.???
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I scribble even as I read you!
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on you knees, natch?
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you know me... whatever it takes!