All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Can We Wish For Rain?"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Gypsy Starchild
I love it... I would not change a thing. Fan story don't think that's good enough though, so....................................................:)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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I love it... I would not change a thing. Fan story don't think that's good enough though, so....................................................:)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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oh you do make me laugh!! I feel like that too sometimes, GS! Hard to rabbit on for 3 more crappy lines, isn't it!!??? Bless you for your lovely six - that was just lovely!
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Sharyn
Comment from GarthL
That's excellent Sharyn and I'm most honored you would choose my eleven77 style/form to express your 'Can We Wish For Rain?' Wish Prompt entry in. You nailed both the eleven77 and the Wish Prompt criteria in one. Good luck in the contest! Thanks so much for validating my new form, you've just made my day. I'll also be bookcasing it for my future reference, thanks again. StaySafe, Garth
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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That's excellent Sharyn and I'm most honored you would choose my eleven77 style/form to express your 'Can We Wish For Rain?' Wish Prompt entry in. You nailed both the eleven77 and the Wish Prompt criteria in one. Good luck in the contest! Thanks so much for validating my new form, you've just made my day. I'll also be bookcasing it for my future reference, thanks again. StaySafe, Garth
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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thx Garth - my second today!! did you see the other? Cocooned in Love - I've been itching to try it! :)))
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I'm slowly making my way through a back-log, Prue and I had a lovely weekend just being and having fun!! Thanks again for your validation of my eleven77, I'm over the moon!!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
you like this style dont you? Wish I was brave enough to try but not ready. You do them so well and they flow so nicely. Great job
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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you like this style dont you? Wish I was brave enough to try but not ready. You do them so well and they flow so nicely. Great job
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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It's such a short style, Barb - great fun to "doodle" with on a rainy day! Glad you liked it! :)Sharyn
Comment from K.W.
Again with the talent!! Somber and wistful. Your words and use of enjambment and visual structure make this an eloquent and wishful read. very well done:) best, k
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Again with the talent!! Somber and wistful. Your words and use of enjambment and visual structure make this an eloquent and wishful read. very well done:) best, k
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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I'm enjoying this style k ... did you do yours yet? :)S
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nope. too busy reviewing:) I'll be up a while yet...we shall see what happens.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I really felt the dry nearly dead body of a failing relationship. Maybe rain would have helped, but it could just as easily washed any remains away. Nicely done. The flow and the stuttered lines helped with the irregular heartbeat feeling.
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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I really felt the dry nearly dead body of a failing relationship. Maybe rain would have helped, but it could just as easily washed any remains away. Nicely done. The flow and the stuttered lines helped with the irregular heartbeat feeling.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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thx so much my dear ... yes, I like to leave it a little up in the air, yes? Bless you for reading & reviewing! :)S
Comment from Indie Skreet
This is so powerful and actually moved me to tears. The first stanza was especially powerful for me, but in truth, the whole poem mirrors exactly how I am feeling. Not sure if I should thank you for that :)
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This is so powerful and actually moved me to tears. The first stanza was especially powerful for me, but in truth, the whole poem mirrors exactly how I am feeling. Not sure if I should thank you for that :)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Bless you Indie - I'm so delighted that this one spoke to you. I'm feeling rather this way myself today - we must be "vibing" each other!
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Well I hope so! Since I am writing as you have sent this, maybe some of your magic will rub off on me :)