I Took A Chance
Love Poem Poetry Contest Submission67 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
You took a chance on love and are living it now!! How wonderful your write is in free verse. I'm loving it very much. I like the fact that you did.
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You took a chance on love and are living it now!! How wonderful your write is in free verse. I'm loving it very much. I like the fact that you did.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from artemis53
What a beautiful poem of hope. i like the single figure and your choice of black and white. You point out why you shouldn't love again and then take the chance and it works, Beautifully done.
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What a beautiful poem of hope. i like the single figure and your choice of black and white. You point out why you shouldn't love again and then take the chance and it works, Beautifully done.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from nighttripper
Recovering from love lost with love found. Emotional and heartfelt. I really like the way you put everything together particularly the closing. Nicely written and thanks for sharing this.
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Recovering from love lost with love found. Emotional and heartfelt. I really like the way you put everything together particularly the closing. Nicely written and thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from dmt1967
This is a nice poem I like the bit about not living until the person in the poem met the partner that was so cool thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
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This is a nice poem I like the bit about not living until the person in the poem met the partner that was so cool thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from MikoAmaya
Great poem, though I think it would flow better if you combined the lines instead of splitting them. People tend to pause at the end of a line and it disrupts the rhythm. Still, it's a very good poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Great poem, though I think it would flow better if you combined the lines instead of splitting them. People tend to pause at the end of a line and it disrupts the rhythm. Still, it's a very good poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from Titanx9
This is an outstanding piece of writing. You captured a lifetime in very few lines, and you ended with the most uplifting lines. The artwork is apropos for this lovely piece; it's like walking into the light after a long period of darkness. Good luck in the contest!
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This is an outstanding piece of writing. You captured a lifetime in very few lines, and you ended with the most uplifting lines. The artwork is apropos for this lovely piece; it's like walking into the light after a long period of darkness. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from uniqueauthor
The soul that never takes chance, will never lean to dance. (From the Rose starring Bette Midler. Aren't you glad you took that chance. I enjoyed the read.
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The soul that never takes chance, will never lean to dance. (From the Rose starring Bette Midler. Aren't you glad you took that chance. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from TammyGail
I enjoyed your verse much - it was well written and expressed throughout in few words - lovely use of imagery as well - thanks for sharing a piece of your soul - and best of luck in the contest
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I enjoyed your verse much - it was well written and expressed throughout in few words - lovely use of imagery as well - thanks for sharing a piece of your soul - and best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written and very beautiful you have expressed so much feeling through the work and is beautifully presented well done good luck regards Jill
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This is very well written and very beautiful you have expressed so much feeling through the work and is beautifully presented well done good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from Schobbs
Normally I would make a mention of grammar and punctuation, but I also believe in artistic presentation, and the words look best with the picture you've provided and the backdrop the way they are. The words were very simple, but I could feel the honesty in them, and that's what's most important. Thank you for writing this. :)
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Normally I would make a mention of grammar and punctuation, but I also believe in artistic presentation, and the words look best with the picture you've provided and the backdrop the way they are. The words were very simple, but I could feel the honesty in them, and that's what's most important. Thank you for writing this. :)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
