I Cried
The emotional expression of my storm53 total reviews
Comment from joann r romei
well as a man and human being, this is exactly the way you should feel,at any time and any for reason, if more men expressed themselves better, there would be less divorce , good luck, i really enjoyed this
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
well as a man and human being, this is exactly the way you should feel,at any time and any for reason, if more men expressed themselves better, there would be less divorce , good luck, i really enjoyed this
Comment Written 18-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thank you very much for your comments and rating, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Crackerberries
Although this is a wonderful poem it does not conform to the rules in the 5-7-5 contest.
A 5-7-5 follows the structure of a Haiku. It has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
If you could update it to the description above I would be happy to change my review... Also some font and background color would be super duper.
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
Although this is a wonderful poem it does not conform to the rules in the 5-7-5 contest.
A 5-7-5 follows the structure of a Haiku. It has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
If you could update it to the description above I would be happy to change my review... Also some font and background color would be super duper.
Comment Written 18-May-2012
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
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Thank you for your input,can you explain about the structure
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You have nine lines and you should have three...your first line has 19 syllables and should have 5.
A 5-7-5 follows the structure of a Haiku. It has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
Comment from Kavya Ram
I like this poem. Sometimes we might feel too down and may cry without reason. There is a good emotional content in this poem and it has really moved me.
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
I like this poem. Sometimes we might feel too down and may cry without reason. There is a good emotional content in this poem and it has really moved me.
Comment Written 18-May-2012
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
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Thank you for your coment