Interlude
An Idyll Poem85 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this poem about the way nature is so beautiful a surrounding to have a romantic interlude with the one you love, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this poem about the way nature is so beautiful a surrounding to have a romantic interlude with the one you love, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much sweetwoodjax, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from chita
You have good imagery and a good flow with your write-you are descriptive as is necessary with this form of poetry and paint a picture in the readers mind--I like where you write(I meet your eyes, desire stirs within) a well penned write--good job.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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You have good imagery and a good flow with your write-you are descriptive as is necessary with this form of poetry and paint a picture in the readers mind--I like where you write(I meet your eyes, desire stirs within) a well penned write--good job.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much chita, for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Kingsland
This poem is rather tranquil in its thoughts and phrases.Is is relaxing to read. It has a very smooth flow to its thoughts and phrases. It was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
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This poem is rather tranquil in its thoughts and phrases.Is is relaxing to read. It has a very smooth flow to its thoughts and phrases. It was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your wonderful words John...I appreciate them...blessings.
Comment from R. J. Stewart
A nice poem about lovers and relationships. Your flow was very nice and the picture was well suited to the piece. Comparsion of a willow tree to that of a couple in love was a great metaphor.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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A nice poem about lovers and relationships. Your flow was very nice and the picture was well suited to the piece. Comparsion of a willow tree to that of a couple in love was a great metaphor.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing R. J. Stewart...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from TSPoet
Wonderful
Your imagery is splended and well defined
I realy like this line:
"Warm sunshine bathes me as I lift my face"
Very imaginitive and realistic
Well done
Thank you
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Wonderful
Your imagery is splended and well defined
I realy like this line:
"Warm sunshine bathes me as I lift my face"
Very imaginitive and realistic
Well done
Thank you
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much TSPoet, for your words...blessings.
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It was my pleasure
Comment from MelissaBickel
When I was looking at this painting I was thinking what a lovely place it would be to get caught up in a bout of passion! I enjoyed seeing in your poem the passion of the place. Lovely
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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When I was looking at this painting I was thinking what a lovely place it would be to get caught up in a bout of passion! I enjoyed seeing in your poem the passion of the place. Lovely
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much MelissaBickel, for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You've created a beautiful scene with your words, although my mind's eye sees a wilder setting than your lovely picture. (Says a lot more about me than you, I suspect :D.) Either place is a perfect setting for lovers. Well done. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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You've created a beautiful scene with your words, although my mind's eye sees a wilder setting than your lovely picture. (Says a lot more about me than you, I suspect :D.) Either place is a perfect setting for lovers. Well done. :) Nancy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much Nancy, for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from LateBloomer
hello author,
you've penned a very beautiful and romantic piece. the poem reads and flows well and i have no suggestion for improvement. I particularly liked the following:
A lone willow tree stands tall and serene.
Colorful wild flowers sprout here and there,
The scent of purple lilacs fills the air
(good imagery)
Keep the ink flowing. Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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hello author,
you've penned a very beautiful and romantic piece. the poem reads and flows well and i have no suggestion for improvement. I particularly liked the following:
A lone willow tree stands tall and serene.
Colorful wild flowers sprout here and there,
The scent of purple lilacs fills the air
(good imagery)
Keep the ink flowing. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much LateBloomer, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I love willow trees, and somehow the description of 'serene' fits them very well.
The backcloth of nature provides a perfect setting for a lover's meeting.
'The scent of purple lilac fills the air' or The scent of purple lilacs fill the air.'
It's a lovely poem. My best wishes for the contest.
Juliette
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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I love willow trees, and somehow the description of 'serene' fits them very well.
The backcloth of nature provides a perfect setting for a lover's meeting.
'The scent of purple lilac fills the air' or The scent of purple lilacs fill the air.'
It's a lovely poem. My best wishes for the contest.
Juliette
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much Juliette, for your great review...blessings.
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
A lovely walk and chance meeting. Great descriptions used to paint the pathway. Very good structure and rhyme. Passionate and yet tastefully written. Beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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A lovely walk and chance meeting. Great descriptions used to paint the pathway. Very good structure and rhyme. Passionate and yet tastefully written. Beautiful poem.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much Daph`s Delights, for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.