Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Harley's Ampeletum"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from amada
You express so well the feelings. The pupples grow so fast, they are not pupplies for too longs. Lovely work here. My best in this book!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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You express so well the feelings. The pupples grow so fast, they are not pupplies for too longs. Lovely work here. My best in this book!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from Adama
Harley is so cute. I thoroughly enjoy reading and keeping up with his antics as he grows. Your poem is vivid and I can just see him jumping up and down as he playfully bites at your hand. Guess he's too cute for you to be mad at him for long.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Harley is so cute. I thoroughly enjoy reading and keeping up with his antics as he grows. Your poem is vivid and I can just see him jumping up and down as he playfully bites at your hand. Guess he's too cute for you to be mad at him for long.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from rosah
just loved reading about this precious little Harley! great poem, sweet little puppy, thank you for sharing your happy thoughts, blessings.
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just loved reading about this precious little Harley! great poem, sweet little puppy, thank you for sharing your happy thoughts, blessings.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from Judian James
Hi there Patty. Oh, what a darling pup he is!! This was a very sweet verse that I could see delighting children in a picture book.
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Hi there Patty. Oh, what a darling pup he is!! This was a very sweet verse that I could see delighting children in a picture book.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a wonderful little poem and a great picture of Harley, he is a cute little whoofer. i enjoyed reading this one.....
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a wonderful little poem and a great picture of Harley, he is a cute little whoofer. i enjoyed reading this one.....
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from markk
What a great poem you've written and quite a form to stick to! well done, so much fun put across in your words sounds like a wonderful dog and wonderful fun for you.
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What a great poem you've written and quite a form to stick to! well done, so much fun put across in your words sounds like a wonderful dog and wonderful fun for you.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from singersun
What a lovely poem! You did a good job with this ampeletum. I enjoyed this very much. My BFF's dogs just had 3 puppies and they are so precious! Yes, they grow so fast! Well-done! ~Singersun~
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What a lovely poem! You did a good job with this ampeletum. I enjoyed this very much. My BFF's dogs just had 3 puppies and they are so precious! Yes, they grow so fast! Well-done! ~Singersun~
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Charming.
I think Harley might be a puppy for a long time. I've always had large dogs, but what I know about Jack Russel's is that they don't give up their childhood easily.
I think I recall reading a subission when you were on your way to pick up your little pooch.
Its nice to have all that joyful energy in the house.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Charming.
I think Harley might be a puppy for a long time. I've always had large dogs, but what I know about Jack Russel's is that they don't give up their childhood easily.
I think I recall reading a subission when you were on your way to pick up your little pooch.
Its nice to have all that joyful energy in the house.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from JeJo
hello patty,
thank you very much for giving this form a try! It is perfect, with everything in place :) And such a cute topic... your puppy is adorable. Still, they outgrow their 'puppy stage' but don't grow any less cuter :) My two dogs were some of the cutest puppies and people comment about them now :) I bet the same will happen to Harley..
They do bring so much joy and smiles with all their little antics, even if its harmful sometimes.
An excellent write describing your relationship with this little bundle of cuteness and joy :) All the best, Jen
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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hello patty,
thank you very much for giving this form a try! It is perfect, with everything in place :) And such a cute topic... your puppy is adorable. Still, they outgrow their 'puppy stage' but don't grow any less cuter :) My two dogs were some of the cutest puppies and people comment about them now :) I bet the same will happen to Harley..
They do bring so much joy and smiles with all their little antics, even if its harmful sometimes.
An excellent write describing your relationship with this little bundle of cuteness and joy :) All the best, Jen
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am honored that you feel I did your poetic form justice! Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from BethShelby
Everyone seems to be writing these Ampeletum poem and they are starting to grow on me. Yours is delightful. I love puppies and enjoy reading about them. You've created a great little poem using this format.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Everyone seems to be writing these Ampeletum poem and they are starting to grow on me. Yours is delightful. I love puppies and enjoy reading about them. You've created a great little poem using this format.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~