Comment from l.raven

Good

your poem is not showing...you need to go back and
see what you did wrong...always read your poem after you save it..............................love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Seasons are getting ready to change,
Summer is soon going to change to fall,
and then fall
is eventually going to change to winter.

Hi there, Brian. You will need to go into edit to either change the font to black because right now it just shows up as a vacant rectangle of light pink.

The changing of the season's (no apostrophe on seasons here)

That said, it's a nice read and many thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021

Thank's for the feedback. My tech skills are average at best. That's the reason my post look's the way it does. I apologize for that.

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

Yay !!!!
It worked! Nice writing!


I don't know if he realizes that you're entry is blank. It's just a square with like a salmon / pink color. I don't know if that's supposed to be a changing of seasons where it's completely blank or if your writing is missing.
I can change my review after it's fixed if it needs fixing, and if not then I will change it as well.

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021

I'm not particularly good with computers. That's always been my weak spot. That's probably the reason My post appears the way it does. I apologize for that. I got a c in computers when I was in college. So, I apologize again for my poor tech skills.

reply by Lana Marie on 29-Aug-2021

No need to apologize, I hate computers and I struggle with it as well. What is it supposed to say?