Chip's Poetry
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Comment from royowen
Well done with this fine entry in this poetry contest. Yes indeed the pines on somebody's face as we age is a testimony and story etched on flesh, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Well done with this fine entry in this poetry contest. Yes indeed the pines on somebody's face as we age is a testimony and story etched on flesh, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks, Roy.
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Welcome
Comment from RodG
Great pairing of photo with your poem. I have never thought of crow's feet or furrowed brows being "clues" life leaves, but if one looks at that picture, it makes sense.
Rod
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Great pairing of photo with your poem. I have never thought of crow's feet or furrowed brows being "clues" life leaves, but if one looks at that picture, it makes sense.
Rod
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks, Rod. They can, but don't always, speak to our stress and habits.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning write and so relevant - nature's roadmap for sure, especially for me - complies fully with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a stunning write and so relevant - nature's roadmap for sure, especially for me - complies fully with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks, Eve!
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You are welcome...Eve
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written seven-word poem about the lInes onot our faces that tell the world around us where we come from and how long it took to come this far.
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A very well-written seven-word poem about the lInes onot our faces that tell the world around us where we come from and how long it took to come this far.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this seven words poem the story tries to find out the nature and personality of the suspect and because of his crooked activities story tells life is not straight but groovy; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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In this seven words poem the story tries to find out the nature and personality of the suspect and because of his crooked activities story tells life is not straight but groovy; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
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Thanks, DR A.
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is a clever write about the effects of aging on the skin. Crows feet show up beside the eyes and furrowed brows leave the grooves in the skin above. Good luck in the contest!
Bill
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That is a clever write about the effects of aging on the skin. Crows feet show up beside the eyes and furrowed brows leave the grooves in the skin above. Good luck in the contest!
Bill
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
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Thanks, Bill!