God Speaks
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Comment from gramalot8
Unless i counted wrong, you only used the word God 21 times, including the one in the title. But I will not hold that against you. It is a great Acrostic poem and it is beautiful. It brings to life the relationship one can have with God. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing this with us.
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Unless i counted wrong, you only used the word God 21 times, including the one in the title. But I will not hold that against you. It is a great Acrostic poem and it is beautiful. It brings to life the relationship one can have with God. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from Malerie
Powerful poem, there are so many stanzas that really leap out for me. One of my favorites is "God has spoken or sent us messages..." also I like "Lovingly we were taught, but we live poorly.." Great piece and it appears you followed all the rules/guidelines. Thanks for sharing.
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Powerful poem, there are so many stanzas that really leap out for me. One of my favorites is "God has spoken or sent us messages..." also I like "Lovingly we were taught, but we live poorly.." Great piece and it appears you followed all the rules/guidelines. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from Joe Grace II
This writing prompt I'm sure was a challenge to pull off. I like the overall message of righteous living and walking and talking God.
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This writing prompt I'm sure was a challenge to pull off. I like the overall message of righteous living and walking and talking God.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from called2rite
Awesome poem, I love the subtle way of including the beginning and the end: that we all can have that close relationship with God in a meaningful way, everyday. Keep up the good work brother in Christ.
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Awesome poem, I love the subtle way of including the beginning and the end: that we all can have that close relationship with God in a meaningful way, everyday. Keep up the good work brother in Christ.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from His Grayness
Wow! a remarkable example of a poetic style new to me but well enjoyed in every way! I'm not qualified to offer any kind of suggestions to improve this work but I can offer my thanks to this fine author for a rear treat! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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Wow! a remarkable example of a poetic style new to me but well enjoyed in every way! I'm not qualified to offer any kind of suggestions to improve this work but I can offer my thanks to this fine author for a rear treat! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
good luck in he contest great
entry. I loved it very much
God bless and have a wonderful day
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good luck in he contest great
entry. I loved it very much
God bless and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from TPAC
I found this write a delighting inspiration, given treasures throughout its read, compelling views captivating to my interests. Yet, remember the angels fought in wars. Both same poop in my view. All in my opinion.
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I found this write a delighting inspiration, given treasures throughout its read, compelling views captivating to my interests. Yet, remember the angels fought in wars. Both same poop in my view. All in my opinion.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting acrostic poem with a good spiritual message. I would have expected for a more natural English structure: Walk, Talk With God and Guide Our Living.
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Interesting acrostic poem with a good spiritual message. I would have expected for a more natural English structure: Walk, Talk With God and Guide Our Living.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
Smiles to your Contest Entry : with your acrostic free verse and following the necessarily requirements
for your excellent poem-
Walk Talk with God & Guide Us Living
Gert
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
Smiles to your Contest Entry : with your acrostic free verse and following the necessarily requirements
for your excellent poem-
Walk Talk with God & Guide Us Living
Gert
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Mame
Truly inspirational with verse that flows freely. What a terrific message- if only we followed God we would be happy at last. Well constructed!
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Truly inspirational with verse that flows freely. What a terrific message- if only we followed God we would be happy at last. Well constructed!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
