God Speaks
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Comment from Reese Turner
It's been a long time since I went to Wednesday night church services, but I feel like I got one done here on Wednesday morning. A very nice way to start a day, a spiritual signpost for the traveler that reminds him of what his journey should hold. Thanks.
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It's been a long time since I went to Wednesday night church services, but I feel like I got one done here on Wednesday morning. A very nice way to start a day, a spiritual signpost for the traveler that reminds him of what his journey should hold. Thanks.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
Comment from swelling
From the heart! Your love and convictions are so clear in your writing. Very honest.
Your expression is a little awkward in places (the last verse) but it was an enjoyable poem none the less.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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From the heart! Your love and convictions are so clear in your writing. Very honest.
Your expression is a little awkward in places (the last verse) but it was an enjoyable poem none the less.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the words but it is vague and not helpful indeed, if your wisdom could clarify the point of your feeling awkwardness so that I could improve, however, I am sure, you have nothing to write as such, though, and you will never come forward to explain and clarify your point, still, I would request you to clarify your stand of feeling awkward, I do not plead my words, but I find, as you have expressed here, you are self-contradictory and obviously your justice is doubtful in terms of your wise expression that is self-contradictory and vague, that is why, I request you to explain your words, if you think, you could, and if you do not clarify and explain your words, in the future, stop reviewing my works, for I do not want such non-helpful and vague review. Please do not take it personally and make it an issue. I have offered clarification with example and let me know how wise you express yourself in a review of my works.
Thanking you once again in advance,
With best regards and best of luck
Comment from jmshumate
This is a nice, almost a prayer request for the reader to be closer with God. I didn't realize this was an acrostic at first until I read your notes. Some of the capital letters threw me off I think. There is just a really good message in this. Walk with God, get to know our Creator better each day. If we seek Him, He will always meet us were we are at, and reveal Himself to us from there. Thank you for sharing this.
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This is a nice, almost a prayer request for the reader to be closer with God. I didn't realize this was an acrostic at first until I read your notes. Some of the capital letters threw me off I think. There is just a really good message in this. Walk with God, get to know our Creator better each day. If we seek Him, He will always meet us were we are at, and reveal Himself to us from there. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from Dean Kuch
A walk with God is an enlightening walk indeed, Alcreator Litt Dear.
The greatest thing about a walk with God is that He is never too busy to take a stroll with us, no matter the hour.
And should we become too weary in our walk with Him, He'll lift us up on his broad shoulders, carry us as one might a child out of the valley of despair, and deposit us on the highest mountain peak.
Nicely penned.
~Dean
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A walk with God is an enlightening walk indeed, Alcreator Litt Dear.
The greatest thing about a walk with God is that He is never too busy to take a stroll with us, no matter the hour.
And should we become too weary in our walk with Him, He'll lift us up on his broad shoulders, carry us as one might a child out of the valley of despair, and deposit us on the highest mountain peak.
Nicely penned.
~Dean
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well penned free verse poem. You used very good words about our God the Creator of all things and man. You wrote of how we would learn more about our journey by talking to our God. Great job! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well penned free verse poem. You used very good words about our God the Creator of all things and man. You wrote of how we would learn more about our journey by talking to our God. Great job! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is a very nicely written Acrostic. I like the free verse and you certainly used it well to portray a message that inspires. It has a nice soft tone and I like that you chose such a great picture to enhance it.
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This is a very nicely written Acrostic. I like the free verse and you certainly used it well to portray a message that inspires. It has a nice soft tone and I like that you chose such a great picture to enhance it.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from susand3022
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear, I really liked your first Acrostic! I wrote my first one just recently as well. The only suggestion I have is that you make your first letter stand out in some way. I didn't realize that it was an Acrostic until I saw your notes. I love that you created your own style! I think it's very cool. :)
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear, I really liked your first Acrostic! I wrote my first one just recently as well. The only suggestion I have is that you make your first letter stand out in some way. I didn't realize that it was an Acrostic until I saw your notes. I love that you created your own style! I think it's very cool. :)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from angel123
I like your free verse acrostic poem. I like your title and message and artwork choice. Your poem flows well with spirituality and I thought your last sentence could have been a little clearer. I read it several times. But it could be my lack of writing experience. Best wishes!
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I like your free verse acrostic poem. I like your title and message and artwork choice. Your poem flows well with spirituality and I thought your last sentence could have been a little clearer. I read it several times. But it could be my lack of writing experience. Best wishes!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi,
This is a lovely poem. A great contest entry - best of luck in the voting booth!
The image you've selected complements your verse nicely and matches the title to a "T!"
My favorite lines:
"On your practice, we will help ourselves save God's Gifted Land a good place for our living "
It's really important that we be good stewards of the lovely planet whose welfare is entrusted to us.
Nothing to suggest improving upon here. Very nicely done.
Thanks for sharing,
Jan
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Hi,
This is a lovely poem. A great contest entry - best of luck in the voting booth!
The image you've selected complements your verse nicely and matches the title to a "T!"
My favorite lines:
"On your practice, we will help ourselves save God's Gifted Land a good place for our living "
It's really important that we be good stewards of the lovely planet whose welfare is entrusted to us.
Nothing to suggest improving upon here. Very nicely done.
Thanks for sharing,
Jan
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from QC Poet
I read down ward walk withhh moy God?
Other than that very enjoyable poem to read beautifully expressive and lovely poem and writing about the subject matter.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
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I read down ward walk withhh moy God?
Other than that very enjoyable poem to read beautifully expressive and lovely poem and writing about the subject matter.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
