The sight of you
A three line poem, 5-7-745 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Love comes into our lives and we find ourselves holding dearly to each and every moment. Eyes are the windows to the outside world my Grandpa always said.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Love comes into our lives and we find ourselves holding dearly to each and every moment. Eyes are the windows to the outside world my Grandpa always said.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, your grandpa was right on****kahpot
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Comment from Mastery
Excellent three-liner, my friend. Your sense of the romantic shines in this poem. The references to glue and foundation suggest building a relationship very well. Blessings, Good luck in the contest. Bob
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Excellent three-liner, my friend. Your sense of the romantic shines in this poem. The references to glue and foundation suggest building a relationship very well. Blessings, Good luck in the contest. Bob
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
We certainly can get the tinglies by looking at a loved one, even though blind people get the vibe a different kind of way. Lovely entry into the contest, kahpot, now you just keep entering and one of these days you'll be the winner.
Best of luck to you. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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We certainly can get the tinglies by looking at a loved one, even though blind people get the vibe a different kind of way. Lovely entry into the contest, kahpot, now you just keep entering and one of these days you'll be the winner.
Best of luck to you. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Kapot, for a short work this is very powerful and I agree, the sight of someone you love is all you need to make your day. Your word choices are so strong and make this work the excellent poem that it is. 'Glue', 'signals' and 'hearts foundation', just excellent.
I have no ideas for improving this writing, the picture suits the poem and all is well. Thank you for sharing your poetry, cheers, Ana.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Hello Kapot, for a short work this is very powerful and I agree, the sight of someone you love is all you need to make your day. Your word choices are so strong and make this work the excellent poem that it is. 'Glue', 'signals' and 'hearts foundation', just excellent.
I have no ideas for improving this writing, the picture suits the poem and all is well. Thank you for sharing your poetry, cheers, Ana.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful and encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
The window to the soul is the eys. This is an excellent contest entry and will do very well in the contest. I wish you the best of luck and hope you have written a winner.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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The window to the soul is the eys. This is an excellent contest entry and will do very well in the contest. I wish you the best of luck and hope you have written a winner.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot