Tulip Time
Largest Festival in Michigan49 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. South of Baseline Road in Phoenix, Az. There us to be acres and Acres of multi colored Tulips. Then progress raise its ugly head.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. South of Baseline Road in Phoenix, Az. There us to be acres and Acres of multi colored Tulips. Then progress raise its ugly head.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
Comment from foxangie123
I love those flowers. I wish they lasted longer. I have some in my yard. This is a lovely piece of writing. A very beautiful fragranced piece.
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I love those flowers. I wish they lasted longer. I have some in my yard. This is a lovely piece of writing. A very beautiful fragranced piece.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
Comment from pmait
Clever lune, not because it is a picture, but because anyone who has been there immediately has the video playing in the brain. I like haiku, but this is so brief that it seems twice as difficult. Should be a promotional poster.
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Clever lune, not because it is a picture, but because anyone who has been there immediately has the video playing in the brain. I like haiku, but this is so brief that it seems twice as difficult. Should be a promotional poster.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
Comment from robyn corum
I'm sorry and I hope you won't be angry at my comments, but this poem seemed to NEED something more. Right now it is just an 'announcement.' There doesn't seem to be any 'poetry' to it. No fresh and new images brought to mind. Just an appointment to add to the calendar - make sense? (sorry!)
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I'm sorry and I hope you won't be angry at my comments, but this poem seemed to NEED something more. Right now it is just an 'announcement.' There doesn't seem to be any 'poetry' to it. No fresh and new images brought to mind. Just an appointment to add to the calendar - make sense? (sorry!)
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
Comment from William Ross
very nice, ours in new York is coming up soon here in the Albany area. Thousands of Tulips around the Capitol. Good luck on this and enjoy your evening.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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very nice, ours in new York is coming up soon here in the Albany area. Thousands of Tulips around the Capitol. Good luck on this and enjoy your evening.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from victor 66
We all wait for spring with baited breath, and at the first sight of new blossoms and robins, we jump for joy. Perhaps not physically, but in our hearts and in our minds. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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We all wait for spring with baited breath, and at the first sight of new blossoms and robins, we jump for joy. Perhaps not physically, but in our hearts and in our minds. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from JourneyHolm
Tulips are one of those very special flowers that are only around for a short while. It's no wonder humans have constructed such elaborate and beautiful festivals around their buds :)
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Tulips are one of those very special flowers that are only around for a short while. It's no wonder humans have constructed such elaborate and beautiful festivals around their buds :)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
Comment from Kaydoe
This Lune poem would make a lovely poster to advertise this event. Love the
picture and it sounds like the place to be in early May. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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This Lune poem would make a lovely poster to advertise this event. Love the
picture and it sounds like the place to be in early May. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
Most very well crafted and presented 5/3/5 lune in this poetry contest, the artwork certainly has an overall affect on this sweetly written entry, I like it, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Most very well crafted and presented 5/3/5 lune in this poetry contest, the artwork certainly has an overall affect on this sweetly written entry, I like it, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Thank you
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most welcome