Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

The soft grace of the Pelican
serenely looking out to the
horizon meshes with your poignant
dance of words of longing as
they artistically pirouette
down the page poetically crying
out for your heart's desire.
Well done

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2016

Well, look at you, Fast!! Your review is poetry in itself :)
Thanks my new friend for this simply stunning review.

Missy

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is a very tender and a very beautiful expression of your longing. I can see the seagulls diving for a treat - good imagery.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2016

Hello, Douglas. :)
Thank you for this lovely review of my work. Makes and old gal like me smile :)

Missy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. It does speak to a beautiful day with no one to share it with. The presentation is great--the artwork, the color scheme, the format, and the message. All work together to create a nice read that has a tinge of bittersweet in it.

Good job and thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2016

Hi there, JP.
Thanks hon for the always kind review of my work, hon.

Missy