Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

It is very interesting reading your memoirs. Thank you for sharing. It is interesting the different laws in the different areas. Then being adopted has it many different directions in life. It seems to be important to know our roots. My grandson followed up and found his dad after his dad left when he was young.
Tree (Three) hours and twenty minutes to go--seven lives up from the bottom.
Very well done.
Joyce 02-27-16

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016

Hi Joyce, thank you so much I am so glad that you enjoy it. I have corrected and made some major edits to it. Hope it reads better now. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. Very interesting story. You do have a small typo near the end. Where you wrote (tree) hours and twenty minutes. I'm sure you meant to type (Three) A small thing and easily fixed. Otherwise you story is perfect.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016

Thank you so much for reading and I have corrected. All the best. Ulla

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

T[h]ree hours and twenty minutes to go. It sounds to me like he might have been tipping into the till and was afraid of being found out. I hope you did find what you were hoping for and that it worked in your favor. Hugs Nancy

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016

Hi Nancy, thank you very much and I have corrected. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Ulla

= How sad to have been adopted, and then be treated so shabbily.
= Makes you wonder why she wanted to adopt at all.
= At least you had a good relationship with her father before he passed.
= Wonder what he would think about her disinheriting you?
= Nicely penned chapter. Have a great weekend.

* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016

Hi Jax, thanks ever so much. I have actually ended up doing major edits to this as I was not entirely happy. More to come soon. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Another good chapter. I continue to enjoy your story. I like the intrigue you set up in this chapter about the inheritance. i saw no errors

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2016

Thank you so much for reading this. All the best. Ulla