Sweet Stephanie
A poem I wrote for someone special55 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
They say food is the way to a man's heat it seems you have discovered that poetry may be the way to a woman's!
Let's say this is in the sweet and soppy class- nothing wrong with that. It is romantic and nature and clearly aimed at a specific person who has spelled out her wants on-line.
Good solid rhyming and well put together.
Steve
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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They say food is the way to a man's heat it seems you have discovered that poetry may be the way to a woman's!
Let's say this is in the sweet and soppy class- nothing wrong with that. It is romantic and nature and clearly aimed at a specific person who has spelled out her wants on-line.
Good solid rhyming and well put together.
Steve
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from P.Preston O.A.G.
Excellent work my FS friend. The bearing of a soul to end in the sharing of a soul is a worthy effort. Good luck in your search for a partner of a similar mindset. Keep the poems coming.
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Excellent work my FS friend. The bearing of a soul to end in the sharing of a soul is a worthy effort. Good luck in your search for a partner of a similar mindset. Keep the poems coming.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Monty, what a lovely poem, straight from the heart. I think Stephanie is going to be a very happy lady tonight. Good luck,
Brenda
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Hi Monty, what a lovely poem, straight from the heart. I think Stephanie is going to be a very happy lady tonight. Good luck,
Brenda
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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hanks so much for your review i appreciate you Linda
Comment from MAMGALAM
' Sweet Stephanie ' is sweet indeed...romantic lines rhyming and flowing from heart to heart.
The poem imparts a pleasant feeling which will linger in the heart for quite a long time ..
May the lady with golden locks and purest blue eyes meet her Prince Charming this year itself...!!
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' Sweet Stephanie ' is sweet indeed...romantic lines rhyming and flowing from heart to heart.
The poem imparts a pleasant feeling which will linger in the heart for quite a long time ..
May the lady with golden locks and purest blue eyes meet her Prince Charming this year itself...!!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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thanks so much for your wonderful Review
Comment from MelB
Another wonderful romantic poem. I love your idea of framing it and giving it to her. I am sure she will be deeply touched by your words. Hope your date goes well and there is a special spark.
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Another wonderful romantic poem. I love your idea of framing it and giving it to her. I am sure she will be deeply touched by your words. Hope your date goes well and there is a special spark.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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me too thank you so much
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You're welcome. Look forward to a post to see how the date went.
Comment from Just2Write
How wonderful that you are writing and sharing your poetry with others. Your quatrains flow very well, and you communicate the feelings of romance very well. Poetry is not only the language of love, but of purity and beauty.
I hope you enjoy your candlelight and wine evening.
Rose.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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How wonderful that you are writing and sharing your poetry with others. Your quatrains flow very well, and you communicate the feelings of romance very well. Poetry is not only the language of love, but of purity and beauty.
I hope you enjoy your candlelight and wine evening.
Rose.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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thank you
Comment from Glasstruth
Sounds very hopeful and upbeat. I think we all want that special conection. Reads very smoothly. Nice abab rhyming. Well crafted. Les
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Sounds very hopeful and upbeat. I think we all want that special conection. Reads very smoothly. Nice abab rhyming. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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thanks so much
Comment from nomi338
Who doesn't like romance? If you find someone who does not, pray for them because they are missing a vital part of being human. I applaud you for the courage you displayed in exposing yourself through poetry to someone you hoped to reach. Risking rejection from someone you hope to connect to is very brave. Congratulations on being successful.
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Who doesn't like romance? If you find someone who does not, pray for them because they are missing a vital part of being human. I applaud you for the courage you displayed in exposing yourself through poetry to someone you hoped to reach. Risking rejection from someone you hope to connect to is very brave. Congratulations on being successful.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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thank you so much i appreciate you review
Comment from TPAC
True to heart poetic conveyances, I find charming in its appeal and pleasing in considerations. I found a delightful read.
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True to heart poetic conveyances, I find charming in its appeal and pleasing in considerations. I found a delightful read.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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thank you
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece you have crafted here. Well written and very sweet. good form and structure throughout.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece you have crafted here. Well written and very sweet. good form and structure throughout.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
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thanks so much