2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "5/7/5 (Little hand in mom's)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from alvina224224
Relevant poem, author and well thought out. A good entry for this contest. The word 'Lost' can be treated in hundreds of ways, I know - be it lost wallet, lost pride, lost direction, but I think your treatment is poignant and evocative. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Relevant poem, author and well thought out. A good entry for this contest. The word 'Lost' can be treated in hundreds of ways, I know - be it lost wallet, lost pride, lost direction, but I think your treatment is poignant and evocative. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the lovely review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from LanceHill
Very nicely stated. This is an excellent lead into the story of the lost sheep. The importance that people know God wants no person to perish. You have chosen a perfect picture for this writing. God bless.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Very nicely stated. This is an excellent lead into the story of the lost sheep. The importance that people know God wants no person to perish. You have chosen a perfect picture for this writing. God bless.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the lovely review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A mom holding her child's hand so that he can not get lost. When the child hold his mother's hand he can easily let go of her hand and get lost.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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A mom holding her child's hand so that he can not get lost. When the child hold his mother's hand he can easily let go of her hand and get lost.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you Sandra, I appreciate your review. :)