Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "Curtain Call"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
64 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
The needs of the season, all manner of unco' beasties ranging the night. Sounds like a scene from a new zombie flick, just right for Halloween and for the Tiny Tales book.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
The needs of the season, all manner of unco' beasties ranging the night. Sounds like a scene from a new zombie flick, just right for Halloween and for the Tiny Tales book.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Thanks for weighing in with your comments for this latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Red. Your time and review are greatly appreciated. All of the other authors who have graciously given of their efforts through contributing stories of their own to this book also appreciate your continued support as well.
Pleasant Screams, and Happy (almost) Halloween!
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hey, Dean,
Grim as it may seem, I have a solution to dear old dad's problem; he needs to get down on his knees and put his head as close to Marissa's as he can...then take careful aim and then........."come and get it!"
Now see what you made me do! What a horrible thought...although it does fit right in with the theme:)
Another great tale to not go to sleep by, lol. Thanks! Lol.
(I hate the living dead!)
So you have a good evening, also, my friend,
Bill
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
Hey, Dean,
Grim as it may seem, I have a solution to dear old dad's problem; he needs to get down on his knees and put his head as close to Marissa's as he can...then take careful aim and then........."come and get it!"
Now see what you made me do! What a horrible thought...although it does fit right in with the theme:)
Another great tale to not go to sleep by, lol. Thanks! Lol.
(I hate the living dead!)
So you have a good evening, also, my friend,
Bill
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Thanks for weighing in with your comments for this latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Bill. Your time and review are greatly appreciated.
Pleasant Screams, and Happy (almost) Halloween!
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from ravenblack
This is one of your best of the tiny tales- very lyrical, parts reading like verse more than prose. The wailing of the sirens clearly effects him like "The Bells". Very Poe and a six if I had one.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
This is one of your best of the tiny tales- very lyrical, parts reading like verse more than prose. The wailing of the sirens clearly effects him like "The Bells". Very Poe and a six if I had one.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Thanks for weighing in with your comments for this latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Ed. Your time and review are greatly appreciated. All of the other authors who have graciously given of their efforts through contributing stories of their own to this book also appreciate your continued support as well.
Pleasant Screams, and Happy (almost) Halloween!
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Dean
_ Those blasted zombies give no concession as they tap ... tap ... tap on the door.
_ Marissa needs to turn into a Chuckie wannabe and annihilate them all. Save Dad is dastardly deed. (*<*)
_ Good 'Dean stuff'!!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
Hi, Dean
_ Those blasted zombies give no concession as they tap ... tap ... tap on the door.
_ Marissa needs to turn into a Chuckie wannabe and annihilate them all. Save Dad is dastardly deed. (*<*)
_ Good 'Dean stuff'!!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Thanks for weighing in with your comments for this latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Jax. Your time and review are greatly appreciated. All of the other authors who have graciously given of their efforts through contributing stories of their own to this book also appreciate your continued support as well.
Pleasant Screams, and Happy (almost) Halloween!
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Ric Myworld
They don't give us enough of these sixes, and I never seem to have them when I need them most. Luckily, today, I have one to give, and it's much deserved. :-)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
They don't give us enough of these sixes, and I never seem to have them when I need them most. Luckily, today, I have one to give, and it's much deserved. :-)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Thanks for weighing in with your comments for this latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Ric, and I'm very grateful for the six star rating. Your time and review are greatly appreciated. All of the other authors who have graciously given of their efforts through contributing stories of their own to this book also appreciate your continued support as well.
Pleasant Screams, and Happy (almost) Halloween!
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
AAAAAhhhhh
Nicely done. I knew there had to be twist.
The story was great and a wonderful addition to the tales.
The ultimate love story
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
AAAAAhhhhh
Nicely done. I knew there had to be twist.
The story was great and a wonderful addition to the tales.
The ultimate love story
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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Thanks for weighing in with your comments for this latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Barb. Your time and review are greatly appreciated. All of the other authors who have graciously given of their efforts through contributing stories of their own to this book also appreciate your continued support as well.
Pleasant Screams, and Happy (almost) Halloween!
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Michaelk
Maybe daddy could give Marissa a hug and kiss, then point the barrel at the back of her head, aiming toward the front of his.
Too bad you can't call 'Time out' like we did as kids, and run away.
Well done as usual. The true horror is what dad was about to do. I can't even imagine having to make a choice like that.
'Night washes over foul scenarios being played out on the face our once beautiful world, much like an ebony velvet curtain closing on the final performance of an ill-conceived play.'
That was one awesome freakin' line. I'm giving you a six just for that. Way to sum up the fate of the world not only in one sentence, but an elegant, vivid sentence.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
Maybe daddy could give Marissa a hug and kiss, then point the barrel at the back of her head, aiming toward the front of his.
Too bad you can't call 'Time out' like we did as kids, and run away.
Well done as usual. The true horror is what dad was about to do. I can't even imagine having to make a choice like that.
'Night washes over foul scenarios being played out on the face our once beautiful world, much like an ebony velvet curtain closing on the final performance of an ill-conceived play.'
That was one awesome freakin' line. I'm giving you a six just for that. Way to sum up the fate of the world not only in one sentence, but an elegant, vivid sentence.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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And I sincerely appreciate the fact that you enjoyed that particular metaphor, Mike. I played with that one, single line for over an hour...seriously!
Thanks for weighing in with your comments for this latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Mike, and I'm very grateful to you for the six star rating. Your time and review are greatly appreciated. We authors who have graciously given of their efforts through contributing stories of our own to this book appreciate your continued support, LOL. We really do! And, being a fellow contributor yourself (on several occasions), as well as a horror aficionado of sorts, it is even more appreciated.
Pleasant Screams, Mike, and Happy (almost) Halloween!
Always with respect
~Dean
Comment from Realist101
OH heck, out of sixes...this is great Dean! And the sound effects too are absolutely chilling. BEcause, that is the sound of disaster! I love the use of dialogue to move the story along. Masterful. And enjoyably creepy! :D Suse
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
OH heck, out of sixes...this is great Dean! And the sound effects too are absolutely chilling. BEcause, that is the sound of disaster! I love the use of dialogue to move the story along. Masterful. And enjoyably creepy! :D Suse
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thanks, Suse, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this latest edition of Tiny Tales of Terror.
Until next time...
Always with respect
~Dean :}
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Dean
So glad zombies are not real
This story of how a father saved his only daughter from the living dead devouring her alive--shot her with his only bullet.
Too bad he met his horrible fate.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
Hello Dean
So glad zombies are not real
This story of how a father saved his only daughter from the living dead devouring her alive--shot her with his only bullet.
Too bad he met his horrible fate.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thanks, Gert. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this latest edition of Tiny Tales of Terror.
Until next time...
Always with respect
~Dean :}
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You are welcome Dean
Gert
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YOU ARE WELCOME Dean
Gert
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Great conclusion. That was the kind thing to do for a loved one. I imagine this is how it will be when ISIS comes for the last of us.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
Great conclusion. That was the kind thing to do for a loved one. I imagine this is how it will be when ISIS comes for the last of us.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thanks very much, Phyllis. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this latest edition of Tiny Tales of Terror.
Until next time...
Always with respect
~Dean :}