2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "5/7/5 (be more like a tree)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Jose Saic
Reading this poem I feel a poet trying to say the purpose of person during his life. He or she will be realistic, with a good basement to help people. Trees are strong, give oxygen and protect our health offering shadow, fruits. Trees represent the lung of nature. Also gives the views of its flowers, colors of leaves in different year station and so on. Yes, to be more that a tree is a wonderful thing. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Reading this poem I feel a poet trying to say the purpose of person during his life. He or she will be realistic, with a good basement to help people. Trees are strong, give oxygen and protect our health offering shadow, fruits. Trees represent the lung of nature. Also gives the views of its flowers, colors of leaves in different year station and so on. Yes, to be more that a tree is a wonderful thing. Congratulations.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent philosophical advice in metaphor, mystery writer - sensible, long-lasting and with strong values, but yet flexible to change if necessary.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Excellent philosophical advice in metaphor, mystery writer - sensible, long-lasting and with strong values, but yet flexible to change if necessary.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much :) I appreciate your excellent review.