Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Dean, what another brilliant story in this wonderful catalogue of horror, I almost felt that poor girls eyes pop out, great skilled writing my friend, I savoured every blood curdling word!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Eric. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support, as always.
~Dean

reply by Eric1 on 13-Jun-2015

My pleasure Dean.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Dean;
-You have totally convinced me that you are insanely crazy and that's your writing. I hope is just fictitious and not one part of your daily schedule, Chuckle! I enjoyed reading this very much, Dean, joking aside. Your writing is amazingly horrifying and being fictitious as it may, it is something that I could believe that happens in the world today. Your decrepit imagery Is superbly expressive and most exponentially and vividly descriptive in all accounts. Either you are influenced by something or someone or you naturally come up with such a horrible demeanor.
All in all, I am really enjoyed reading this. You are a great writer.
Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Dean.
Alex

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Alex. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
God bless...~Dean ;}

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi, Dean...

_ Well! Really, the nerve of her----'Another One Bites The Dust'----so rude to disrespect the host, don't ya think?
_ This was a super sixer. Enjoyed the read, top to bottom.
_ I loved the matter of fact, please face front and center while I mutilate you. So rude to turn away.
_ Great addition to your book.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for the sixer, Jax, and I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed the story. Your feedback and insight into my writing is always important to me, and I greatly appreciate it. ~Dean :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this tale of the man who liked to play with dolls so he made his own, lol. i'll start making my ken doll now.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Pam. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
God bless...~Dean

Comment from justafan

Excellent

The creator of darkness is very busy I see. Your creation today is brilliant as always. I could almost feel the cold steel against my jaw. I am always amazed at your talent for the macabre my dear friend.
This is no exception. Brilliant work!!

Always your biggest fan,
Missy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Missy. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

reply by justafan on 13-Jun-2015

You are most welcome

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You are most welcome

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

This really is one of your best horrible tales Dean. So well written that you can feel the effort that this person is putting into his 'work'. Italics work well to emphasise the strain going into the stitching, eye removal etc. Quite grotesque and plenty of ...... is very effective showing that so much effort is going into his work while he is talking. A great, nasty tale, but for me not as sickening as the 'earwig' one. LOL. Regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Dorothy. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Ghoulish, Sir Dean. I am confused though. Is the book itself multi-authored, or is this story alone a joint victory?

A victory it is! and I suppose that's all that matters.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

This is a book which was created so that any Premium member of FanStory could post stories in it, Jay, and that even includes you, heh-heh!The only stipulations being that the story be between 500 words -- (to fall within flash fiction parameters) -- to 100 words (which is classified now as micro-fiction), and pertains to the horror/thriller genre. I simply wanted to allow some of the writers here who may have never dabbled in the genre before an opportunity to do so, and most everyone seems to be having lots of fun with it. That's really what it's all about, just having fun with the written word. You know, just like you do, lol?

Thanks a bunch for the review, Jay. I really do appreciate it, all kidding aside. :)
~Dean

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Just when I thought you could not get any creepier, you go and post this. Yuck, icky, and down right ghoulish...your imagination is limitless and down right scary. Great work with this one. You really sent goosebumps up my spine with this one.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

Thanks, Valerie. If that's true, then I accomplished exactly what I set out to do while writing it. But hey, what good is a terror tale if it doesn't create a little bit of...well, terror?
Thanks so much again for taking the time to review this one~ ~Dean