Comment from krys123

Excellent

Dean;
+ A classic presentation of a really good terror tale that definitely can put the hair standing on and on any child who reads it. Very well written Dean with a great introduction to lead up to the scarier part of the story.
+ Excellent pictures to add to dramatic nature of the story in pictures that were very appropriate, relative and complementary to the story.
+ The story had just some terrific imagery that was terrifyingly descriptive throughout the writing. Especially the best part, this is what I think, is when the crows go into the barn but they never come out. That sets the whole tone for the story in creation all the mysterious adventure.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting this Dean and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015

Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction, Alex. I sincerely appreciate your fine feedback. :)

~Dean

reply by krys123 on 16-Apr-2015

You are so welcome Dean. Sometimes I can't put a finger on it but I do know how your poems make me feel. And as always one of complete and sincere interest in the poem makes you feel. This is what's so much fun in reading your styles of poetry. Take care my friend and God bless.
Alex

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I'm slow. Had to read this a couple of times to "get" it.
I guess when the scarecrows turn human, they get locked away? Or am I way off track?

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015

Hello, Shari...

Thank you for your interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction. I truly appreciate your feedback, my friend. :)

~Dean

Comment from madhatter1977

Excellent

Hi, Dean, great flash fiction once again! Your tiny tales of terror are exquisite! This was very short and could be fleshed out more (get it, "fleshed out"), lol! Hope you are doing well my friend and apologies for missing posts. I've been off the site and hiking in the great outdoors for most of the last week, though we had snow today. All the best, Pete :)

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015

Hey, Pete...

Thanks a bunch for your continued interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales of flash fiction, my friend. I truly appreciate your feedback. :)

~Dean

reply by madhatter1977 on 17-Apr-2015

You're very welcome, Dean! They're great and I hope you can get a publisher! Best wishes, Pete :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

An interesting write on the classic haunted house tale. Dean, I think you need more to make this a complete flash fiction tale. As it is, I can't see the point. I know you are great at horror, better than I, but I don't see this as a story, certainly it is part of old classics.

note:

"That's where they lock us away -- the bad scarecrows -- after we've...turned."
- who is speaking? Is it the man?

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015

Hello, Lance...

Thank you for taking an interest in this series of tiny, twisted, terror tales, my friend. I truly appreciate your valuable feedback. :)

~Dean

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

AAAAhhhh never let me do a 100 word contest with you. Never, ever.
WEre you injured as a child? If so it was for the best because I think I will never tire of thses little masterpieces.
Nicely done.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2015

Hah, ha, I'm sure you'd hold your own just fine, Barb, LOL. And, as far as I know, I had a very normal, delightful childhood. Therefore I have absolutely no excuses to fall back on, other than the fact that I enjoy trying to scare people half to death. Is that wrong? Heh-heh...

I very much appreciate your review. :) ~Dean

Comment from Mastery

Exceptional

Alright. Where in the hell did you get the statue of the dead scarecrow looking dude, my friend. You probably dug the sonofabitch up out of the ground,didn't you?

Scary....very scary and very effective, my friend. Blessings and the music is a nice touch, btw. Bob

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015

Hah-hah, you know me all too well, Bob. I set it up in my own back yard, LOL...

Thanks for the sixer and the comments, my friend. I'm happy to see you've taken an interest in these tiny tales of terror with a twist. They are a lot harder to write and create than I initially thought they would be...Whew!>i> ;)

~DeanO