Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

An elegantly passionate poem you have penned, for our enjoyment, beautifully written, and romantic.. the form you used (no punctuation) allowed the use of enjambment and made for a pleasant read..I enjoyed this poem it was a pleasure to read, Sincere Congratulations on the Win!
Thanks for sharing,
Hugs,
Victoria

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

well thank you so much, Victoria! :)Sharyn - and hugs right back to you my dear!

reply by mrsmajor on 16-Feb-2013

You're very welcome, it was my pleasure!

Victoria

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Congratulations on winning the passionate love in black and white contest.
Excellent presentation. Romantic, seductive,hypnotizing. Lovely use of alliteration throughout.
Loved it.
Janet :)

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

thx so much Janet - this was fun to write! :)Sharyn

Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

Oooo...I can see why this won. Congratulations! You have filled this piece with vivid descriptions of passion, as well as lots of wonderful poetic devices. Flows beautifully. Hugs, Sue

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

thx so much, Sue - these are always fun! :)Sharyn

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

This is a really good poem and very passionate. I enjoyed it. It gave a sense of urgency to call my husband and want to go dancing, especailly since we just celebrated our Anniversary yesterday. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

Good for you, Bobby Jo - thank you! :)SHARYN

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Seriously steamy! You obviously know passion at it's best, because your wonderful poem exudes that knowledge with every word. A very worthy contest winner - well done!

Alexis x

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

Bless you, Alexis!! How lovely to see that magic '6'!!! :)Sharyn

Comment from amada

Excellent

Congratulations in winning the passionate love in black and white contest. Perfect delivery. From the rush of the floor's dance to the seduction of taking off the shoes. Aperfect passion.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

thx so much amada! :)Sharyn

Comment from Glasstruth

Exceptional

I can see why you won. Brilliantly passionate. The poem moves like if it's dancing too. Really nice alliteration in these lines:
"take me home now
taut tuxedo
light my loving
in velvet dark" Fantastic! Les

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

Bless you Les! I rather liked those lines, too. A special big "thank you" for your lovely SIX! Yippee! :))))Sharyn

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

think the dancer is seducing more than your heart - but that's the point. like the urgency of the piece. the form, the brevity of the line, contributes to the sense of urgency

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

thx so much! :)Sharyn

Comment from Opal H.

Excellent

Congratulations on your well deserved win!! Love the rhythm of this poem - it really sounds like you could dance to it. Nailed it!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

thx so much Opal! :))))Sharyn

Comment from cantrhymetoogood

Excellent

This poem is psssion filled and I imagined a delightful tango which played as to dancers displayed their lust for one another in a moving display of a lovers dance.

glide me, slide me
feel my heat now
closer, closer
pressed against you
musky scented
hypnotize me
warm and wanting
I'm on fire <<< These were my favorite lines and drew close to this work.

Thank you for this lovely work... Regards, Robert

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013

so glad you came along to tango with us my dear - thank you so much! :)Sharyn