All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Through My Open Door"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written poem paints a vivid picture of one at peace, enjoying the moment while being entertained and awed by outdoor scenes.
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Your well-written poem paints a vivid picture of one at peace, enjoying the moment while being entertained and awed by outdoor scenes.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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thx so much Janice! :)S
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
Sounds like a peaceful way to start the day. One question...I don't mean to be picky, but I am wondering when you mowed...in the dark? Beautiful poem, my pickiness aside. Elizabeth Daniels.
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Sounds like a peaceful way to start the day. One question...I don't mean to be picky, but I am wondering when you mowed...in the dark? Beautiful poem, my pickiness aside. Elizabeth Daniels.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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oh you gave me a GREAT chuckle!!! you're right! I changed it, so poor husband doesn't have to do the midnight mow! :))) thanks Elizabeth - you obviously have a mind that's as quirky as mine! :)Sharyn
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I read it again...makes much more sense. lol I wrote a manuscript for a novel a couple years ago. It is amazing how after editing and rewriting three times how things like that jump off the page at you. It really was an appealing poem.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is another well done write especially for this contest. Obvious word-smithing here which I cherish so much. I specially like the use of 'shepherding' in the second to the last line.Good work.
ola thomas
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This is another well done write especially for this contest. Obvious word-smithing here which I cherish so much. I specially like the use of 'shepherding' in the second to the last line.Good work.
ola thomas
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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thx so much, Ola!
Comment from Winslow
Dear Visionary,
What a wonderful description of an invigorating morning. Let the new day begin because by viewing the world around me it brings joy.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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Dear Visionary,
What a wonderful description of an invigorating morning. Let the new day begin because by viewing the world around me it brings joy.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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bless you, Winslow - I really appreciate your sharing my morning coffee with such great pleasure. And you brought ME some extra pleasure this morning with your lovely six! :)Sharyn
Comment from MelissaBickel
Something I've always appreciated about your poetry is your eye for details. It's as if you've invited us to experience the moment with you.
If I had a six it would be yours. I admire your work.
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Something I've always appreciated about your poetry is your eye for details. It's as if you've invited us to experience the moment with you.
If I had a six it would be yours. I admire your work.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much, Melissa! :)Sharyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
watch my grass grow greener
till next week's mow
and the early morning rooster
shepherding his harem into the future
This poetry transports the reader to tranquil
thoughts. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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watch my grass grow greener
till next week's mow
and the early morning rooster
shepherding his harem into the future
This poetry transports the reader to tranquil
thoughts. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
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Thx so much B.O. :)Sharyn
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece grabbed my attention from the beginning and held it to the end. This is a good read that make the imagination work. The words gave life to the photo and this piece flowed well despite no rhyming. Good job.
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This piece grabbed my attention from the beginning and held it to the end. This is a good read that make the imagination work. The words gave life to the photo and this piece flowed well despite no rhyming. Good job.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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Thx RR! :)Sharyn
Comment from Laureen Bennett
A wonderfully written and very descriptive free verse poetry style done so well! I love the "open door" image spoken about here and the "worn, over-stuffed, and comfy" introductory line that seems to invite the welcomed guest, the reader, in to sit and ponder the poetry! Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of poetry with us!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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A wonderfully written and very descriptive free verse poetry style done so well! I love the "open door" image spoken about here and the "worn, over-stuffed, and comfy" introductory line that seems to invite the welcomed guest, the reader, in to sit and ponder the poetry! Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of poetry with us!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
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Thx so much Laureen! :)Sharyn
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Ahhh, how beautiful this is! How I love your descriptive creations. I sat there, beside you, in your overstuffed chair, listening to the palm trees rustling, watching the orchid horizon and smelling the newly mown grass...Ahhh, Hawaii, take me away! Love traveling with you as you make it so easy. Just perfectly written. Betty
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Ahhh, how beautiful this is! How I love your descriptive creations. I sat there, beside you, in your overstuffed chair, listening to the palm trees rustling, watching the orchid horizon and smelling the newly mown grass...Ahhh, Hawaii, take me away! Love traveling with you as you make it so easy. Just perfectly written. Betty
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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Bless you, Betty! :)Sharyn
Comment from ravenblack
it must be nice. having just entered a winter poem, this piece makes me envious. again, great use of language and word play. particularly like " orchid sky intricately latticed". you really deliver a sense of the tropics.
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it must be nice. having just entered a winter poem, this piece makes me envious. again, great use of language and word play. particularly like " orchid sky intricately latticed". you really deliver a sense of the tropics.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much rb! :)Sharyn