All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Just for Me"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Oh, I am in Heaven! Chocolate delightful Heaven! Now this is what I call a Valentine! Where is this wonderful male cook? Tarzania? Book me a flight! Good luck in the contest!
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Oh, I am in Heaven! Chocolate delightful Heaven! Now this is what I call a Valentine! Where is this wonderful male cook? Tarzania? Book me a flight! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thx Ray - off to Tarzania with you dear! :)S
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yw! I have been hunting something chocolate since I read your work. Tearing the kitchen up! MN :)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is a wonderful Valentine's Day poem and I must say that after reading this I do want chocolate. LOL. Great job with this and good luck in the contest
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This is a wonderful Valentine's Day poem and I must say that after reading this I do want chocolate. LOL. Great job with this and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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Thx so much Red Bird! :)S
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Sharyn,
This is so beautiful has so many descriptive words, a tropical blend of words. I love chocolate, and seem to taste it here. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha,
Ginger
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Aloha Sharyn,
This is so beautiful has so many descriptive words, a tropical blend of words. I love chocolate, and seem to taste it here. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha,
Ginger
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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Thx so much Ginger! :)))Sharyn
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
This is absolutely fantastic!! Please don't let this drift off to Fanstory's 'Never-Never-Land', never to be seen again. This should be on a valentine card, at the very least. I think this may be the BEST, most CREATIVE writing I've seen on this site. You are one in a million, my friend. Bravo!! Betty
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This is absolutely fantastic!! Please don't let this drift off to Fanstory's 'Never-Never-Land', never to be seen again. This should be on a valentine card, at the very least. I think this may be the BEST, most CREATIVE writing I've seen on this site. You are one in a million, my friend. Bravo!! Betty
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Yippee! What a gorgeous review, Betty! Thank you SO much, and a special double/triple thank you for your lovely SIX!
:)SHARYN
Comment from Cornelius2000
Ah, luscious indeed. I'm jealous of the guy who's the object of all this affection and attention....sounds as if it's going to be a very nice evening.
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Ah, luscious indeed. I'm jealous of the guy who's the object of all this affection and attention....sounds as if it's going to be a very nice evening.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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I'll be very sure to remind him how lucky he is, Dave! :)S
Comment from mystery poet
OoooooWeeeeeeee!!!}} Your valentines days a
blueprint that needs to be posted and sold
at amazon.com. It would only take a few months
to get all the ingredient's together unless your
muse could work the magic...The ultimate contest
entry with all the love one could muster!!!
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OoooooWeeeeeeee!!!}} Your valentines days a
blueprint that needs to be posted and sold
at amazon.com. It would only take a few months
to get all the ingredient's together unless your
muse could work the magic...The ultimate contest
entry with all the love one could muster!!!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Bless you, mp! I'm so delighted you enjoyed my culinary work of art! And a special BIG thank you for your lovely SIX! (NEARLY AS GOOD AS CHOCOLATE!)
best wishes
Sharyn
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Nearly is...best wishes!
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Chocolate and Robin go together. I could taste the creamy delectable treat.
A lovely verse that oozes with flavor and vivid pictures throughout. A true
delight. Now I need some chocolate. Robin :)
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Chocolate and Robin go together. I could taste the creamy delectable treat.
A lovely verse that oozes with flavor and vivid pictures throughout. A true
delight. Now I need some chocolate. Robin :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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me too, Robin!! Blessings - so glad you enjoyed! :)Sharyn
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Holy moly, Sharyn. Being something of a fan of chocolate, I was drooling most of the time as I read this. What a fantastic and fun poem. This HAS to be worthy of that first prize bouquet. SO original in form and content. What a lucky husband you have.
HAHA! Got a big chuckle out of Tarzania too!
Well done indeed.
Av
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Holy moly, Sharyn. Being something of a fan of chocolate, I was drooling most of the time as I read this. What a fantastic and fun poem. This HAS to be worthy of that first prize bouquet. SO original in form and content. What a lucky husband you have.
HAHA! Got a big chuckle out of Tarzania too!
Well done indeed.
Av
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much Av - yes, you could say I had fun ... :)
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Sharyn,
Now, that's what I call a devoted partner in love. Such fuss and bother would not be appreciated by my husband. If it's not Hersey's, it's not chocolate in his book.
You have created an extraordinary visual adventure. I particularly enjoyed the trip to England. It's not enough to get cream from contented cows crunching on gentle grasses, but it has to be during the Changing of the Guard as well. Now, that's a hoot.
Hugs,
Lou
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Hi Sharyn,
Now, that's what I call a devoted partner in love. Such fuss and bother would not be appreciated by my husband. If it's not Hersey's, it's not chocolate in his book.
You have created an extraordinary visual adventure. I particularly enjoyed the trip to England. It's not enough to get cream from contented cows crunching on gentle grasses, but it has to be during the Changing of the Guard as well. Now, that's a hoot.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Who could resist ragging on poor Liz? Thx so much Louise! :)Sharyn
Comment from MM lives on :)
Dear poetess, a colorful delightful fun ride and although I loathe Valentines Day you have given me a dash of hope to enjoy this day, 6'er for you and a hello from a friend!
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Dear poetess, a colorful delightful fun ride and although I loathe Valentines Day you have given me a dash of hope to enjoy this day, 6'er for you and a hello from a friend!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Bless you Christopher! Aren't you a cousin/ friend of Tammy & Mark? I miss them! But thank YOU very much for one of your treasured SIXES! :)SHARYN