Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Shelley kaye, my dear - I really like this tanka. I think it has all the ingredients of a good one. No chppy lines like so many have, and it has a wonderful, wispy quality. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-May-2012

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reply by the author on 17-May-2012

thank you robyn :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very nice shelley,
I like your tanka instead if oulling off one petal at a time let the-
daisy petals dance
and ask questions in the wind,
is it love .... or not?

Smiles
Gert

 Comment Written 17-May-2012

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reply by the author on 17-May-2012

thank you gert :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 17-May-2012

smiles
gert

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

I love the way you presented your daisy petals dance - Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry with the picture, the perfect picture on the bottom. Your words are so lovely and I wish you luck in the contest...Dinah

 Comment Written 17-May-2012

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reply by the author on 17-May-2012

thank you dinah :)

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A tanka about the daisy petals--I also notice the acrostic form here--good, creative idea--I like it! thank you--this is really cute!

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 Comment Written 17-May-2012

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reply by the author on 17-May-2012

thank you capricorn :)