Steve's Story-Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Grampus Saves the World"A collection of my poems
74 total reviews
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Poet,
This is a superb poem for animal opinions contest. It is creative and such fun to read. I am not one for long poetry but I was sad when this one came to an end. You demonstrate a great imagination and I love everything about this humorous poem. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Hi Poet,
This is a superb poem for animal opinions contest. It is creative and such fun to read. I am not one for long poetry but I was sad when this one came to an end. You demonstrate a great imagination and I love everything about this humorous poem. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from gazzagodbod
great effort loved it such a wonderful story of the whales view of human kind and their way of destruction great work and a strong contender to win the contest thanks gazza
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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great effort loved it such a wonderful story of the whales view of human kind and their way of destruction great work and a strong contender to win the contest thanks gazza
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Writeaway...
A humourous poem about the rise of the whales, lol. An excellent job, mystery writer, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, good luck in the contest, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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A humourous poem about the rise of the whales, lol. An excellent job, mystery writer, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, good luck in the contest, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from pickthorn
A humerous prompt entry that indicts the world powers that continue to pollute this planet and cause global warming. Very well written. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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A humerous prompt entry that indicts the world powers that continue to pollute this planet and cause global warming. Very well written. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Matoshka
This was fun, yet there was good information here if you really digest the words. I love the picture and your words just flowed so smooth and what a visual you created with your words. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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This was fun, yet there was good information here if you really digest the words. I love the picture and your words just flowed so smooth and what a visual you created with your words. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
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You are so welcome, I enjoyed it very much. Blessings
Comment from MizKat
This is a very nice poem and was an an interesting read. I love the rhyming in it too. It's a great piece for the Animals Opinion prompt Kat
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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This is a very nice poem and was an an interesting read. I love the rhyming in it too. It's a great piece for the Animals Opinion prompt Kat
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from missy98writer
Mystery Poet,
your poem is splendid written and rich in imagery with great use of personification. Adorable art work you used. Your rhymes are very good. I enjoyed the lines: "So the whale folk soon set forth On their journey to the north For they meant to grant the grampus his last wish. Mothers, fathers, sons and daughters Left behind the frigid waters And set off to find that fabled airborne fish." Your creative poem is an excellent entry in the Animal Opinions writing prompt contest. I wish your good luck in the contest and voting booth. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Missy.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Mystery Poet,
your poem is splendid written and rich in imagery with great use of personification. Adorable art work you used. Your rhymes are very good. I enjoyed the lines: "So the whale folk soon set forth On their journey to the north For they meant to grant the grampus his last wish. Mothers, fathers, sons and daughters Left behind the frigid waters And set off to find that fabled airborne fish." Your creative poem is an excellent entry in the Animal Opinions writing prompt contest. I wish your good luck in the contest and voting booth. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Missy.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it. Competition is tough in the booth :o(
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is really cute. It's the first poem I have read for this contest. I have a feeling other's are following. I really enjoyed your humorous poem. It read well, due to the good rhythm and rhymning scheme.
Their Mission Statement simply 'Save the World (Oh so true)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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This is really cute. It's the first poem I have read for this contest. I have a feeling other's are following. I really enjoyed your humorous poem. It read well, due to the good rhythm and rhymning scheme.
Their Mission Statement simply 'Save the World (Oh so true)
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it. Yes, there are several excellent poems in this contest...
Comment from WilliamDeen
Wow! What a vivid imagination!!! Great poem with a serious message included.
But being such lazy lubbers
We lost them in our blubbers love these two lines!
Thanks so much for sharing, Pamela
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Wow! What a vivid imagination!!! Great poem with a serious message included.
But being such lazy lubbers
We lost them in our blubbers love these two lines!
Thanks so much for sharing, Pamela
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the review - glad you enjoyed it. Yes, it turned a little more serious than intended...
Comment from lola29
Your poem is exceptional because it shows great creativity and tells a wonderful story from the whale's perspective. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Your poem is exceptional because it shows great creativity and tells a wonderful story from the whale's perspective. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your review. Glad you enjoyed my greeny whale...