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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Harley's Ampeletum"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from Gungalo
You did just great girl!!! I'm so proud of you for trying it out and what a subject ... one you know really well. JeJo will be proud of you for this one too.
I love it!!!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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You did just great girl!!! I'm so proud of you for trying it out and what a subject ... one you know really well. JeJo will be proud of you for this one too.
I love it!!!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you again for the generous SIX STARS and your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed Harley's poem. ~patty~
Comment from kintesiegel
this is a cute poem that works in this form that you have tried out. I could imagine the two pups together. that must really be something.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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this is a cute poem that works in this form that you have tried out. I could imagine the two pups together. that must really be something.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading the latest poem in my Pet Poems series. I'm glad you enjoyed it, along with Harley's puppy photo. ~patty~
Comment from Helen Tan
Patty, I'm not great with rhyme schemes so I only commented on content. I enjoyed this, thanks.
Oh the joy puppies bring
with their little faces
puppy barks, nips and fun
running puppy races
They're always full of life. I don't miss picking up the constsant "gold nuggets" before they're toilet trained.
On my hands are traces
little teeth leave their mark
I try to scold Harley
My mini Schnauzer is now 3 yet he still enjoys nibbling on my hand as a sign of greeting in the mornings.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Patty, I'm not great with rhyme schemes so I only commented on content. I enjoyed this, thanks.
Oh the joy puppies bring
with their little faces
puppy barks, nips and fun
running puppy races
They're always full of life. I don't miss picking up the constsant "gold nuggets" before they're toilet trained.
On my hands are traces
little teeth leave their mark
I try to scold Harley
My mini Schnauzer is now 3 yet he still enjoys nibbling on my hand as a sign of greeting in the mornings.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading the latest poem in my Pet Poems series. I'm glad you enjoyed it, along with Harley's puppy photo. ~patty~
Comment from skye
Pets bring out words of joy and love.
Your poem is well constructed, an ode to a wonderful part of your life.
I love the name, the picture, and the joy he brings to your life.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Pets bring out words of joy and love.
Your poem is well constructed, an ode to a wonderful part of your life.
I love the name, the picture, and the joy he brings to your life.
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading the latest poem in my Pet Poems series. I'm glad you enjoyed it, along with Harley's puppy photo. ~patty~
Comment from honeytree
I loved the very cute picture, and the words written.Both the
art work and words very creative and beautiful.
I like this poem and will be great, to add to your book.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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I loved the very cute picture, and the words written.Both the
art work and words very creative and beautiful.
I like this poem and will be great, to add to your book.
Honey tree
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from RYME4U
Cute and unique. Is the picture of your Harley?I love how he is singing puppy songs and running puppy races. Good rhyme and rhythm in the Ampeletum style.Good job!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Cute and unique. Is the picture of your Harley?I love how he is singing puppy songs and running puppy races. Good rhyme and rhythm in the Ampeletum style.Good job!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Yes, the pic is Harley, and he is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from sunny39
I love the poem and the adorable picture. The pup's name, Harley, is perfect.
This is a very difficult form of poetry, and I certainly admire your finished work.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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I love the poem and the adorable picture. The pup's name, Harley, is perfect.
This is a very difficult form of poetry, and I certainly admire your finished work.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from RobertaLee
This is wonderful Patty. I was wondering when the next edition of "Harley" would come out...enjoyed the ones your wrote about bringing him home, etc. This is an interesting form too, and it flows very well for your voice. I think you've found something new to do that really fits-but your redouble was excellent too. Hmmm, maybe you are just a ver good and inspired writer. Smiles.
Blessings,
Roberta
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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This is wonderful Patty. I was wondering when the next edition of "Harley" would come out...enjoyed the ones your wrote about bringing him home, etc. This is an interesting form too, and it flows very well for your voice. I think you've found something new to do that really fits-but your redouble was excellent too. Hmmm, maybe you are just a ver good and inspired writer. Smiles.
Blessings,
Roberta
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from AmorGentil
Very good rimes and rhyme, especially the way that you finish your poem, you are very talented, dogs, puppy dogs, yes I like them, no so much the lazy cats, them I don't thrust.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Very good rimes and rhyme, especially the way that you finish your poem, you are very talented, dogs, puppy dogs, yes I like them, no so much the lazy cats, them I don't thrust.
Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~
Comment from Realist101
Hi Patty! WHAT a doll. Harley is a real cutie and your poem is too. I can see how much he means to you too. Also, your ampeletum is good! I wouldn't dare try this! Excellent work...") Susan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Hi Patty! WHAT a doll. Harley is a real cutie and your poem is too. I can see how much he means to you too. Also, your ampeletum is good! I wouldn't dare try this! Excellent work...") Susan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing another of my pet poems. Harley is a joy and keeps me on my toes - and chews on them, too. LOL. Your kind words make us both smile. ~patty~