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Rooted in Dixie

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My early life and Southern roots

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Comment from Sandy P.
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This is a great entry for the contest. I love that you used such a unusual story - something that, on the surface may seem small, but when applied to your adult life, still has an impact of a lesson learned. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
Sandy


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
    Thank you so much for the review and the delightful comments.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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I know this story very well and you told it so well. I even grew up in the grocery store. I did not find any spag. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 03-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
    Thank you so much for the review and for finding something that you could relate to. I appreciate the good wishes.