CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Roisin
Go on! I dare ya! Great fun poem with, of course, perfect meter and I love your rhyme scheme. The internal rhymes are all great. Are you tempted???
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Roisin
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Go on! I dare ya! Great fun poem with, of course, perfect meter and I love your rhyme scheme. The internal rhymes are all great. Are you tempted???
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Roisin
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Yes, I've been tempted! HA! But, just don't want to see an old woman's behind in the mirror one day with a big blotch of ink! HA!! Thanks for your great review. Sue
Comment from Hitcher
Boy...I say...I say Boy, look at me Boy! A tramp stamp, That is harsh to say the least! I could look at that piece of As rt all night, ha ha, Hey! We already no there is no hope for me. I is what I is! This is great, no this is awesome because it is you who has written it and that is priceless.
I've got ink, not too much, but I got some!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Boy...I say...I say Boy, look at me Boy! A tramp stamp, That is harsh to say the least! I could look at that piece of As rt all night, ha ha, Hey! We already no there is no hope for me. I is what I is! This is great, no this is awesome because it is you who has written it and that is priceless.
I've got ink, not too much, but I got some!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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I LOVE FOGHORN LEGHORN!!! LMAO!!!! "I say..I say.. boy...you look like 5 miles of bad road!" - (That's what he said to the old beat-up dog) LMAO!!! Yes, it is what it is....hot stuff! HA!!! Thanks much for your "priceless" review! :-)) Suc
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Isn't he a gem!!
Comment from dportwood
I'm amazed at those who flaunt the art for the behind. Somehow the T-shirt is too short and the pants hang too low. Really enjoyed this one.
Duane
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I'm amazed at those who flaunt the art for the behind. Somehow the T-shirt is too short and the pants hang too low. Really enjoyed this one.
Duane
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from benjan
A picture paints a thousand words, but I doubt that anyone is listening. They're too busy picking their eyeballs off the floor. The rhyme and meter really got me - I love the way this read. It's such a fun poem to start with and the flow really adds to the fun. I don't have a tattoo, nor do I want one. I've seen too many old soldiers with wrinkled ink blots on their arms. lol Thanks for the chuckle!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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A picture paints a thousand words, but I doubt that anyone is listening. They're too busy picking their eyeballs off the floor. The rhyme and meter really got me - I love the way this read. It's such a fun poem to start with and the flow really adds to the fun. I don't have a tattoo, nor do I want one. I've seen too many old soldiers with wrinkled ink blots on their arms. lol Thanks for the chuckle!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Yeah, quite a picture! HA! Wait til those young chicks start to wrinkle up a bit. OMG! So, I won't really be gettin' a tramp stamp. Ha! Glad you liked the poem and thanks for your review. Sue :-)
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad I read this poem after your "Jealousy" and not the other way around--just luck. You must have had as much fun writing this ditty as I did reading it. I think we should get those transfer decals/temporary tattoos to satisfy the urge and yet eliminate the risk! LOL--but just a tiny one to put discreetly on the arm or leg.
You found an extraordinary picture to match your whimsy. You rhymes and jests were all top notch.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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I am glad I read this poem after your "Jealousy" and not the other way around--just luck. You must have had as much fun writing this ditty as I did reading it. I think we should get those transfer decals/temporary tattoos to satisfy the urge and yet eliminate the risk! LOL--but just a tiny one to put discreetly on the arm or leg.
You found an extraordinary picture to match your whimsy. You rhymes and jests were all top notch.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Hi Joan! Glad you liked this one. Hey, the transfer tats are a great idea! We could get temporarily "wild"! HA!! Thanks for your excellent review. Sue :-))
Comment from jeslaf
Hysterical and I can picture the whole scenario...good to know you got the goods, though I never doubted it. Ha! Fun one, Sue. :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Hysterical and I can picture the whole scenario...good to know you got the goods, though I never doubted it. Ha! Fun one, Sue. :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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So glad you got a laugh! I really do like some of those tatoos, but just won't do it. Middle-age crisis?? HA! Thanks so much for your great review. Sue :-)
Comment from jdrhye
Fun little write. I once went in to get a "tramp stamp" and the guy doing the inking talked me out of it. I wanted him to ink a picture that I designed. Not sure if he was talking me out of the tatoo or he could not ink my picture. Anyway glad I never got one! Flow and rythm is good and the story is clear. Enjoyed this little read.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Fun little write. I once went in to get a "tramp stamp" and the guy doing the inking talked me out of it. I wanted him to ink a picture that I designed. Not sure if he was talking me out of the tatoo or he could not ink my picture. Anyway glad I never got one! Flow and rythm is good and the story is clear. Enjoyed this little read.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2009
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Your story is just like my poem!! Ha! Can't even imagine why an "inker" talked you out of it! Thanks for your great review. Sue :-))
Comment from raimie
Lol, that cracks me up. We were conversing about tramp stamps the other day, some girlfriends and I at lunch. We all have small tats we did in college and hate. One of us a rose, another a dolphin, and the other a sunflower. We couldn't imagine anything as big as that tramp stamp, lol!
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Lol, that cracks me up. We were conversing about tramp stamps the other day, some girlfriends and I at lunch. We all have small tats we did in college and hate. One of us a rose, another a dolphin, and the other a sunflower. We couldn't imagine anything as big as that tramp stamp, lol!
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Seriously, I have looked at them and thought, "maybe just a small one". HA!!! And I have NO idea why! LOL!! Thanks for your great review. Glad you got a good laugh from it. That's was my intent. With regards, Sue
