I Still Love You More
To Kenzie Jo, my granddaughter ~ in monorhyme51 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is beautiful and heartfelt and as a parent myself, I and I am sure many other parents, are right with you on this.
Unconditional love flows both ways in a healthy parent-child relationship.
Your poem describes this in such a delightful manner.
Tim x
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
  |
This is beautiful and heartfelt and as a parent myself, I and I am sure many other parents, are right with you on this.
Unconditional love flows both ways in a healthy parent-child relationship.
Your poem describes this in such a delightful manner.
Tim x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
Hi Tim, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind, I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
-
Debbie,
We all get busy, and especially so at this time of year.
Enjoy yourself and take whatever time you need to be with those who matter to you :)
Tim x
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww, this is beautifully expressed in your monorhyme (that fits the sentiments perfectly). What's more, I can completely imagine how this exchange was triggered and how it'll now be there forever more and more:)) Thanks for sharing both your verse and your gorgeous granddaughter (I know, only temporarily:)) Love Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
|
Aww, this is beautifully expressed in your monorhyme (that fits the sentiments perfectly). What's more, I can completely imagine how this exchange was triggered and how it'll now be there forever more and more:)) Thanks for sharing both your verse and your gorgeous granddaughter (I know, only temporarily:)) Love Debbie
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
You are so right, Debbie. This is something we do every time we text or talk.
I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind, I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
What a sweet and endearing monorhyme poem for Kenzie Jo. So filled with love and joy for this lovely granddaughter. Sweet pictures to share that complement your wonderful poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
|
What a sweet and endearing monorhyme poem for Kenzie Jo. So filled with love and joy for this lovely granddaughter. Sweet pictures to share that complement your wonderful poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
Hi Janet, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind, I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written model rhyme poem for your granddaughter Kenzie Joe, and I very much enjoyed listening to it rhymes that long are not usually very easy to do, but you have achieved it very well. May you have a blessed day and I do wish the very best for your granddaughter. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
|
This is a beautifully written model rhyme poem for your granddaughter Kenzie Joe, and I very much enjoyed listening to it rhymes that long are not usually very easy to do, but you have achieved it very well. May you have a blessed day and I do wish the very best for your granddaughter. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
Hi Patricia, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind, I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Debi,
What a beautiful poem. Is this written for your daughter? You are so talented my friend. The girl in the picture is beautiful.
I hope you had a great Thanksgiving yesterday. Can you explain to me what meter in a poem is. I got a comment yesterday about not having any. I'm not sure I know what she's talking about. She also said my poems are lists. I'm all for constructive criticism, but give me some examples so I can work on it.
Hope you are having a great day my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
|
Debi,
What a beautiful poem. Is this written for your daughter? You are so talented my friend. The girl in the picture is beautiful.
I hope you had a great Thanksgiving yesterday. Can you explain to me what meter in a poem is. I got a comment yesterday about not having any. I'm not sure I know what she's talking about. She also said my poems are lists. I'm all for constructive criticism, but give me some examples so I can work on it.
Hope you are having a great day my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
-
Hi Sweetie, thank you for your very kind comments about Kenzies poem.
I would love to help you with your questions and I will read your poem and tell you what the person was saying. First of all about meter, it usually means when you can read a poem and it flows and you never stumble.
I will read your poem and review it how they were meaning it. Ok? And I love that you want the feedback because so did I and I got lots of help and found out how bad my meter was. In fact if you would like, I would love to help you with some of your poems. I will see you soon. Love, Debi
-
Debi,
Thank you. I knew I could depend on you to help me figure this stuff out. I'm all about learning and if I could be as good as you that would be awesome.
You are a rockstar my friend.
Cecilia xoxo
-
I just reviewed your last poem. Read my review and let me know what you think. I have been working with a woman on meter for a couple months now and she said she couldn't hear it. I told her someday she'd hear the difference and now she does and her writing is lovely.
-
Thank you my friend.
Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful, Debi! Every word shows the love and the pride you have for Kenzie and it flows down the page into the reader's heart. Lovely! What a gift for your granddaughter. She's beautiful!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
 |
Beautiful, Debi! Every word shows the love and the pride you have for Kenzie and it flows down the page into the reader's heart. Lovely! What a gift for your granddaughter. She's beautiful!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
Carol, I am so sorry but I got so behind. However I did truly appreciate your kind review and most lovely six stars. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely collage and nice presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a good poem for your granddaughter.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you develop the theme of "love you more."
-You have a wonderful relationship with Kenzie Jo.
-Is she pursuing art as a career?
-Thanks for sharing everything and
showing the love between the two of you.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
|
-Lovely collage and nice presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a good poem for your granddaughter.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you develop the theme of "love you more."
-You have a wonderful relationship with Kenzie Jo.
-Is she pursuing art as a career?
-Thanks for sharing everything and
showing the love between the two of you.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
Pam, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind. However I did truly appreciate your kind review. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
Love, Debi
-
You are very welcome, Debi, and you don't need to apologize for a late reply. I still appreciate it and your friendship. Have a great day.
Comment from Sanku
Is it your granddaughter's birthday? You are lucky to see your grandchildren grow up before your eyes.! This is beautiful and I hope she will treasure it..
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
|
Is it your granddaughter's birthday? You are lucky to see your grandchildren grow up before your eyes.! This is beautiful and I hope she will treasure it..
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind. No, it isn't her birthday. We were goofing around texting again and I started to write her a little poem with part of these lines and then I thought, I might as well finish it and use it. Thanks again and I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Is it Kenzie's birthday, or did you just want to tell her that "you love her more?"
A sweet rhyming poem for your beautiful granddaughter, and the pictures make it personal.
Thanks for sharing Kenzie Jo with us. It was about a year ago that she did some art work for me:-) Tell her I said "hello".
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
|
Is it Kenzie's birthday, or did you just want to tell her that "you love her more?"
A sweet rhyming poem for your beautiful granddaughter, and the pictures make it personal.
Thanks for sharing Kenzie Jo with us. It was about a year ago that she did some art work for me:-) Tell her I said "hello".
xo
Pam
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
Hi Sis, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind. No, it isn't her birthday. We were goofing around texting again and I started to write her a little poem with part of these lines and then I thought, I might as well finish it and use it. Thanks again and I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend and bd twin.
Love, Debi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I feel the same about my granddaugher, Chloe. This poem was adorable, Debi, I hope you are going to give it to her? Is that her as she is now in the left picture? I recognise you with her as a child, you don't change. This is another very well written poem, my friend, one to be cherished. Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xx
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
|
I feel the same about my granddaugher, Chloe. This poem was adorable, Debi, I hope you are going to give it to her? Is that her as she is now in the left picture? I recognise you with her as a child, you don't change. This is another very well written poem, my friend, one to be cherished. Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xx
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
-
Hi Sandra, I am so sorry this is late, but I got so behind. We were goofing around texting again and I started to write her a little poem with part of these lines and then I thought, I might as well finish it and use it. Thanks again and I did truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my sweet friend.
Lotsa Love and hugs!! Debi