The Guy You Love to Hate
A Teikei-shi for the club43 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
I definitely think it's a red flag if someone doesn't want to communicate, she's definitely better off without him. A well written piece, Debi, I thought it was entertaining and well written.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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I definitely think it's a red flag if someone doesn't want to communicate, she's definitely better off without him. A well written piece, Debi, I thought it was entertaining and well written.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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I sure appreciate your awesome review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Debi! The picture is perfect for your written words and the thought is oh so true. Love tends to muddy the waters and send us sailing into the wild blue younger, before we remember we don't know how to fly. LOL Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't. Guess we hope for the best!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Good morning, Debi! The picture is perfect for your written words and the thought is oh so true. Love tends to muddy the waters and send us sailing into the wild blue younger, before we remember we don't know how to fly. LOL Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't. Guess we hope for the best!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi Carol, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
PS, you can send me info about yourself any time now for your birthday poem. Or if you would rather have the questions, I can send them to your email??
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I is different to see rhyme in a Japanese form.
-You do a good job describing each character,
beginning with the guy who thinks he's great.
-Good concluding lines about her and how
she might have made a better decision about a mate.
-Well done.
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I is different to see rhyme in a Japanese form.
-You do a good job describing each character,
beginning with the guy who thinks he's great.
-Good concluding lines about her and how
she might have made a better decision about a mate.
-Well done.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi Pam, I know I felt like a few people almost scolded me for breaking the unwritten laws of Japanese poetry with my rhyming poem. LOL.
I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the kind comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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You are very welcome for the review, Debi. I was surprised to see rhyme in a Japanese form, too.