Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

This is a great tribute to your love for your brother. I'm glad he is recovering well and I give him my best wishes. I did not catch any errors at all in this piece. Good luck with this particular piece and happy writing!

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

Thanks, Lindsey. I appreciate your kind wishes. Yes, I do love my brother. We were getting closer before this happened and now we are closer still. Thanks for your positive feedback.
Take care, and have a great day.
Jesse

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I am pleased he has successfully come through his heart surgery and I hope he will have a steady and complete recovery with no complications. Waiting for someone while they are in surgery is a very anxious time. You put it to positive use by writing this poem. Well done.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024

Thanks, Wendy. Your supportive and encouraging review is appreciated. It is amazing how effective it is to use the waiting time to write a poem. I felt less anxious when I did it.
Have a lovely day.
Jesse