Average Poet
a rhyming poem64 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hi Jesse. I enjoyed your rhyming poem. It's musical rhythm was just what I needed to brighten my day. Most of all, I liked your heartfelt, honest, and realistic message as we witness your progress. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi Jesse. I enjoyed your rhyming poem. It's musical rhythm was just what I needed to brighten my day. Most of all, I liked your heartfelt, honest, and realistic message as we witness your progress. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Jesse, this poem is brilliant! Just beautiful, and I would watch in rapture any one-man show you put on! You're exceptional, modest and inspiring! Maddy
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Jesse, this poem is brilliant! Just beautiful, and I would watch in rapture any one-man show you put on! You're exceptional, modest and inspiring! Maddy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Jesse,
I hope you are well. I like your rhyming poem, the rhymes flow nicely and don't sound forced. You did well. I like the presentation too. Well done.
gypsy
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Hello, Jesse,
I hope you are well. I like your rhyming poem, the rhymes flow nicely and don't sound forced. You did well. I like the presentation too. Well done.
gypsy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem , Jesse, about the poetic writing process itself, which is fertile ground indeed, very creative and humorous, at east I've found it fertile
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Another fine poem , Jesse, about the poetic writing process itself, which is fertile ground indeed, very creative and humorous, at east I've found it fertile
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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And so you have it! Fertile it is! Creativity and humor are both fertile in your work as well as mine. Thanks, Mike for understanding the process of poetry writing. Your lyrics are excellent too.
Jesse
Comment from jmdg1954
Jesse.
As I read your poem, I felt my head nodding and my words almost singing. The cadence to me have it that nod!
My favorite lines...
Eventually, I'll get there
my heart will start to glow
with stylish creativity
I'll pen a one-man show
Well done, my friend.
John
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Jesse.
As I read your poem, I felt my head nodding and my words almost singing. The cadence to me have it that nod!
My favorite lines...
Eventually, I'll get there
my heart will start to glow
with stylish creativity
I'll pen a one-man show
Well done, my friend.
John
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I like the way you tie frosty fingers to warming your muse.
This rhymed and flowed beautifully, Jesse. Nice to see you posting again:-)
xo
Pam
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I like the way you tie frosty fingers to warming your muse.
This rhymed and flowed beautifully, Jesse. Nice to see you posting again:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This was a fun piece to read. I nodded along not only in syncopated time but in complete understanding of the emotions being expressed. Nicely done. I enjoyed it.
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This was a fun piece to read. I nodded along not only in syncopated time but in complete understanding of the emotions being expressed. Nicely done. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Nothing ventured, nothing gained. That makes you above average because you took the chance and wrote a poem to lift our spirits, amuse us, and accomplish one more step in the journey of writing a poem. Much braver than I!!! Well done, my friend.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Nothing ventured, nothing gained. That makes you above average because you took the chance and wrote a poem to lift our spirits, amuse us, and accomplish one more step in the journey of writing a poem. Much braver than I!!! Well done, my friend.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from nomi338
Wonderful. This pleasing post felt like a warm hug from a treasured friend. It was nice and easy, not hurried, not frenzied, just nice and easy. I felt a sense of calm as I read your super cool post. You have a very real talent and I enjoy reading your posts.
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Wonderful. This pleasing post felt like a warm hug from a treasured friend. It was nice and easy, not hurried, not frenzied, just nice and easy. I felt a sense of calm as I read your super cool post. You have a very real talent and I enjoy reading your posts.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us. I enjoyed reading and can tell you have fun writing this. It shows in the writing. I happen to think you're a very good poet.
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Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us. I enjoyed reading and can tell you have fun writing this. It shows in the writing. I happen to think you're a very good poet.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024