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The Car That Brought Us Together

Grandkids love to tell the story

46 total reviews 
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Debi, what a delightful poem. And so fun!! You owe it all to a green car. Too funny. So you'll be married to Andrew for 50 years!! Man o Man, I think Wayne and I might be able to pull up 50 between us.

And you were so young when you got married!! Good for you. I was 19, and oh I thought I was so old. I cringe at it now.

Great poem, dear friend,
Much love,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    Dearest Rhonda, I thank you with all my heart. You are so sweet and I appreciate all the kind words and the gracious six stars. I will think of you on our anniversary. Thanks again, my very wonderful friend. Hugs!!
    Love, Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Ah, the car that drove you down the road to happiness. I remember reading about this car before. It's a very fun story and I see why your grandchildren love to hear it again and again. This was a fun poem that made me smile. BTW, my husband and have a May 17th anniversary. Gretchen

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    Dearest Gretchen, I thank you with all my heart. You are so sweet and I appreciate all the kind words and the gracious six stars. I will think of you on our anniversary. Thanks again, my very wonderful friend. Hugs!!
    Love, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
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Well, Happy Easter!

Incredible poem capsilating your life in a few short lines. You had me hooked from the first line to the last.

Nicely composed and I wouldn't be surprised if it becomes the contest winner.
Enjoy the day.
John

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    Dear John, I thank you with all my heart. You are so sweet and I appreciate all the kind words and the gracious six stars. I will think of you on our anniversary. Thanks again, my very wonderful friend. Hugs!!
    Love, Debi
Comment from Lisasview
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Absolutely the perfect poem to read this morning as I sit here dealing with the flu..Love the whole thing.. the color of the car, the green back ground but most of all the loving thoughts... who knows what will happen intones life...right?
Sounds like you were meant to be together...
Your friend,
Lisa

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    Dearest Lisa, I thank you with all my heart. You are so sweet and I appreciate all the kind words and the gracious six stars. I will think of you on our anniversary. Thanks again, my very wonderful friend. Hugs!!
    Love, Debi
reply by Lisasview on 02-Apr-2024
    You deserved the 5 stars!!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    But LOL, Lisa dear, you gave us six stars! (Smile)
reply by Lisasview on 03-Apr-2024
    Very cute and I see you won the Acrostic poem... I knew you would!!
    Lisa
Comment from NanaGaye
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What a beautiful rhyming love poem telling your story. Sure was a flash car,but having a family is more important. Hope you are having a happy Easter weekend, Easter Sunday is nearly over for us down under. Love and best wishes

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    My dearest Gaye, I thank you with all my heart. You are so sweet and I appreciate all the kind words and the gracious six stars. I will think of you on our anniversary. Thanks again, my very wonderful friend. Hugs!!
    Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
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There tends to be catalysts for what we do in life, so it's such a great testimony to share these wonderful words with us, I was wondering if that was the actual car Debi? It sure is a Beaty, as you are. This is a beauty Debi, blessings Roy
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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    Hi Roy, I thank you so very much for the kind words for our anniversary and for having some fun with me and my early years of shallow immature love for the car LOL. Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by royowen on 02-Apr-2024
    Well done