Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Seth has been such a huge support, I wonder if he paid the vet's bill? It sounds like the congregation have been very generous and I loved the warmth coming through in this post Barbara.

Suggestion for this line, no need for (to) here:
You'll (to) have to wait here."

Another fine chapter in your heartwarming story Barbara, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023

Thank you for the catch. I have deleted that little work. I usually omit the small words and have to include them. I think this must be a first actually adding one. LOL I appreciate the help.

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

This is another engaging chapter, with some excellent dialogue as well. You can see how much Molly is loved, I liked the line when Seth tells Emma that Molly lifted her head when she sang. You can see just how grateful Emma is that Molly is okay. Another excellent addition to your book, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023

Thank you for the encouragement.