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An unfortunate late night occurrence42 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A good possibility to happen. I see a kid still young enough to be frightened by the thunder and lightning but then old enough to be embarrassed by messing in his pajamas.
A clever and a good 100-word story for the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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A good possibility to happen. I see a kid still young enough to be frightened by the thunder and lightning but then old enough to be embarrassed by messing in his pajamas.
A clever and a good 100-word story for the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Thank you Mary. So many of my posts are serious, I just want to have some fun sometimes.
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And you did with this story
Comment from BethShelby
Poor kid. That must have been terrifying. I don't think I want to get into a shower while that was going on, but then again desparate times call for desparate measures.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Poor kid. That must have been terrifying. I don't think I want to get into a shower while that was going on, but then again desparate times call for desparate measures.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Absolutely. If it happened to me, I would want to get clean as soon as possible. Thank you for your review comments.