Guided by Faith
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Comment from Ben Colder
Well, our two Gorma cooks have gotten the transportation bit ironed out. Seems as if this is falling in place for the great day. Good story but still hooked on the Confederate. LOL.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Well, our two Gorma cooks have gotten the transportation bit ironed out. Seems as if this is falling in place for the great day. Good story but still hooked on the Confederate. LOL.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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It is. Seth and Emma are headed in the right direction but moving very slowly. Thank you for th kind review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Oh dear. Emma has reverted to not accepting help easily - still at least she admits it now. Your description of pain was very realistic, but I wonder wether stiffness would set in so quickly. kay
Emma eyes closed with pain > Emma's eyes closed with pain
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Oh dear. Emma has reverted to not accepting help easily - still at least she admits it now. Your description of pain was very realistic, but I wonder wether stiffness would set in so quickly. kay
Emma eyes closed with pain > Emma's eyes closed with pain
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and the catch. I have made the correction. Depending on the person and the circumstances the pain can show up quickly.