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Comment from JSD
Lovely! Great use of that rhyme but it is natural and easy and you still manage to tell the reader so much about you and your life. Thank you for sharing this.
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Lovely! Great use of that rhyme but it is natural and easy and you still manage to tell the reader so much about you and your life. Thank you for sharing this.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Hi JSD, I sure appreciate your very kind words for me and my poem. Thank you so much, my very dear friend.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Enjoyed your monorhyme, Debi, which gave your verse a fun, up-beat tone with nice flow and cohesion. Your joyful sentiments celebrate your family and good fortune whilst acknowledging the challenges that can so easily undermine one's journey. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Enjoyed your monorhyme, Debi, which gave your verse a fun, up-beat tone with nice flow and cohesion. Your joyful sentiments celebrate your family and good fortune whilst acknowledging the challenges that can so easily undermine one's journey. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Hi Debbie, I sure appreciate your very kind words for me and my poem. Thank you so much, my very dear friend.