Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Daylight Savings Time?"Musing of an old man
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Good news is no more day light saving time. We are stuck in the current one. So it will be dark early in the fall when we need a "fall back". So the rowing season will cut short (just joined the rowing club again).
Like the internal rhyming.
I think this might be better:
knowing that is it sleep I lack.-> knowing that is THE sleep I lack.
Well done and good luck.
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Good news is no more day light saving time. We are stuck in the current one. So it will be dark early in the fall when we need a "fall back". So the rowing season will cut short (just joined the rowing club again).
Like the internal rhyming.
I think this might be better:
knowing that is it sleep I lack.-> knowing that is THE sleep I lack.
Well done and good luck.
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thank you good catch!