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Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "cumulus clouds - haiku"keep your hope alive....
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Comment from nomi338
Clouds may be welcomed as a relief from a burning sun. However, on a day when you are seeking the sun, clouds may very well spoil your fun. Clouds have uses that may please or displease anyone at any time.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Clouds may be welcomed as a relief from a burning sun. However, on a day when you are seeking the sun, clouds may very well spoil your fun. Clouds have uses that may please or displease anyone at any time.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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i prefer clouds!! LOL 🌥️😂😎❤️🖊️
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Living in Southern California, I value rain clouds as we hardly ever see any.
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omg! you're in pomona?!?? i grew up in ontario! went to chaffey high school!!
i'm in oc now....
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Hey neighbor. I have lived in Pomona since 1978, my children and grand children grew up here. They all graduated from Pomona High school. My son briefly attend Pfizer college for one semester, lost interest and decided on another course of life. Broke my heart.
Comment from karenina
Hello again! I've never outgrown the love of watching clouds morph into every form imaginable! It's moveable art... A dragon! A flower! An angel! Thanks for bringing this alive for me again. I'm heading outside!
Karenina
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Hello again! I've never outgrown the love of watching clouds morph into every form imaginable! It's moveable art... A dragon! A flower! An angel! Thanks for bringing this alive for me again. I'm heading outside!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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😂LOL!🌼😇 thank you karenina 🌥️🙂❤️🖊️
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Cloud watching! My favorite exercise!
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I like the third line a lot - it gave a great connection to
the first two lines. The artwork the author chose for this poem
compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I like the third line a lot - it gave a great connection to
the first two lines. The artwork the author chose for this poem
compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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thank you harmony! 👍❤️🖊️🌥️
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
This is very expressive for such a short poem. I love thinking of the sun as 'day star'; and who hasn't been outside on a hot summer day and been so relieved when a cloud moves over the sun's direct gaze and creates that nice, cool shade? Very nice!
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This is very expressive for such a short poem. I love thinking of the sun as 'day star'; and who hasn't been outside on a hot summer day and been so relieved when a cloud moves over the sun's direct gaze and creates that nice, cool shade? Very nice!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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yup! thank you donna 🌥️😊❤️🖊️
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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thank you raul 😊❤️🖊️🌥️
Comment from Jammer11
Creative and fun. I like how you used yellow for one word in the text. It compliments the blue nicely. I like the word you used to describe its movement in the sky. Thanks for sharing.
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Creative and fun. I like how you used yellow for one word in the text. It compliments the blue nicely. I like the word you used to describe its movement in the sky. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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thank you jammer 🙂❤️🖊️🌥️
Comment from Tina Crute
What a beautiful blue presentation, with sunshine to boot. I never thought of the sun being given a respite before, but cool analogy! Your words conjure up that the clouds are doing it on purpose, giving the sun a respite. For a small poem, there is actually a lot to entertain the reader here. Well done! Good Luck in the contest!
Tina
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What a beautiful blue presentation, with sunshine to boot. I never thought of the sun being given a respite before, but cool analogy! Your words conjure up that the clouds are doing it on purpose, giving the sun a respite. For a small poem, there is actually a lot to entertain the reader here. Well done! Good Luck in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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thank you tina ❤️🖊️🌥️🙂
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Lovely words that paint a clear picture of the moving clouds on a sunny day. I saw nothing that needs change. Enjoyable read - thank you for sharing.
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Lovely words that paint a clear picture of the moving clouds on a sunny day. I saw nothing that needs change. Enjoyable read - thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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thank you sherry 🌥️❤️🖊️🙂
Comment from Janet Foor
Love this. Even without the picture, I can visualize the blue sky and clouds. I am a walker and I love those cumulus clouds to brock out the bright sun and give me a shady respite.
Beautiful haiku,
Blessings
Janet
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Love this. Even without the picture, I can visualize the blue sky and clouds. I am a walker and I love those cumulus clouds to brock out the bright sun and give me a shady respite.
Beautiful haiku,
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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yup! thank you janet! 👍🙂❤️🖊️🌥️
Comment from Teri7
Shelley, This is a very well written haiku you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
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Shelley, This is a very well written haiku you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
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thank you teri 🌥️🖊️❤️🙂