Blood on the sand
A swap qatrain.58 total reviews
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is very deep. And the fact, that the whole
of the poem is Godly, makes it even more epic.
And I like that. Nevertheless, I will be looking
forward to reading more. So Keep Doing your thing young man!!!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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This is very deep. And the fact, that the whole
of the poem is Godly, makes it even more epic.
And I like that. Nevertheless, I will be looking
forward to reading more. So Keep Doing your thing young man!!!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks again, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from irishauthorme
Very interesting composition, good flow, and great rhythm.
Good testimonial to the strength of our faith, tested by time, mocked by others, stalked by all the daily temptations we face.
Seems the general population is drifting away from faith, and belief in the strength of prayer.
Good work,
irish
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Very interesting composition, good flow, and great rhythm.
Good testimonial to the strength of our faith, tested by time, mocked by others, stalked by all the daily temptations we face.
Seems the general population is drifting away from faith, and belief in the strength of prayer.
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Irish, for these fabulous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your swap quatrain is in great form, Roy. Your rhymes work well, the swap lines fit in smoothly, and your message is strong and clear and true. The image is a great pairing. I know this is a favorite style of yours that you do well.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your swap quatrain is in great form, Roy. Your rhymes work well, the swap lines fit in smoothly, and your message is strong and clear and true. The image is a great pairing. I know this is a favorite style of yours that you do well.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Jan, for these fabulous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Melodie Michelle
AWESOME POEM my friend! It's exceptional and I give you a VIRTUAL SIX STARS because I'm out of sixes to give, unfortunately;-(
I totally enjoyed this piece of well written poetry and such an honor to our Jesus and Father God!
Thanks for sharing this piece with us and many blessings;-)
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AWESOME POEM my friend! It's exceptional and I give you a VIRTUAL SIX STARS because I'm out of sixes to give, unfortunately;-(
I totally enjoyed this piece of well written poetry and such an honor to our Jesus and Father God!
Thanks for sharing this piece with us and many blessings;-)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Michele, for these fabulous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Bill Schott
This swap quatrain, Blood on the Sand, has the right formatting and reminds the readers of God's gift to man and the sacrifice which saved the world.
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This swap quatrain, Blood on the Sand, has the right formatting and reminds the readers of God's gift to man and the sacrifice which saved the world.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Bill, for these fabulous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from DeboraDyess
Roy, you've combined my favorite poetic form and my favorite topic and guy. :) This is exceptionally beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. YOu've just lifted my moon and set my course for the afternoon. What a blessing!
May I share with my pastor? He loves to read poetry with his sermons when it pertains.
Blessings,
Deb
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Roy, you've combined my favorite poetic form and my favorite topic and guy. :) This is exceptionally beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. YOu've just lifted my moon and set my course for the afternoon. What a blessing!
May I share with my pastor? He loves to read poetry with his sermons when it pertains.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Of course you may, anything in my portfolio is at your disposal, God says to share our gifts, they?re not really ours anyway, thanks for the great heads up, blessings Roy
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Have you come across the FB group 'Get Your Music Heard in 2022'? (What a mouthful!) They have some cool free training and then, of course, a class they encourage you to take that ONLY costs $1000. lol. I learned a lot from the free training but, for the first time in a long time, wished we had more savings set back for things like this. It was interesting. And I should have invited you! But if you're interested, PM your email and I'll send the replays. They come down on Tues. so I'll check tonight and tomorrow for your email.
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I?ll send it by PM Deb
Comment from Anne Johnston
Beautifully written, Roy. So thankful for the precious blood that Jesus shed to pay the penalty for our sin and shame. And then, He rose again from the dead to defeat death for us all.
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Beautifully written, Roy. So thankful for the precious blood that Jesus shed to pay the penalty for our sin and shame. And then, He rose again from the dead to defeat death for us all.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Anne, for these fabulous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome
Comment from aryr
Thank you so much for writing this, Roy. It was beautiful and built on the faith and the trust of Christ, Our Lord. There is such magik in your words. There is the love and belief in Christ. Blessings.
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Thank you so much for writing this, Roy. It was beautiful and built on the faith and the trust of Christ, Our Lord. There is such magik in your words. There is the love and belief in Christ. Blessings.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Alie, for these fabulous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
I wish I had a six for this. I truly loved this one. It spoke to my heart. Your words express how I feel. Thank goodness my heart is blessed with a strong faith. I don't know how I managed without it all those years.
Thank you for sharing. This gave me hope today.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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I wish I had a six for this. I truly loved this one. It spoke to my heart. Your words express how I feel. Thank goodness my heart is blessed with a strong faith. I don't know how I managed without it all those years.
Thank you for sharing. This gave me hope today.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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You are my favourite writer, and you are my go to person
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That is the sweetest thing. Thank you!
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Bless you girl
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is another great poem written by you. The rhyming scheme and the flow are both very good. But for me the message is even better. Yes, we are all called by God. He shall return. We must be ready.
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This is another great poem written by you. The rhyming scheme and the flow are both very good. But for me the message is even better. Yes, we are all called by God. He shall return. We must be ready.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Barabara, for these fabulous comments and a great review, blessings Roy