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Comment from Boogienights
A beautiful lune poem and very true. Isnt it a winder how God designed nature to create and protect that beautiful creature. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
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A beautiful lune poem and very true. Isnt it a winder how God designed nature to create and protect that beautiful creature. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
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thank you boogie :-)
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely lune poem. I was not familiar with this form of a condensed haiku of 5-3-5 syllables. You paint a beautiful picture with a minimal amount of words. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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A lovely lune poem. I was not familiar with this form of a condensed haiku of 5-3-5 syllables. You paint a beautiful picture with a minimal amount of words. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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thank you janet :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This quick short poem gives the stages of life for the butterfly. I like the way you spread out the middle word to show the spreadig of the wings, maybe.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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This quick short poem gives the stages of life for the butterfly. I like the way you spread out the middle word to show the spreadig of the wings, maybe.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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thank you joan :)
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Any time.
Joan
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I thought about how much I love butterflies and their
symbolism. I visualized butterflies and how they emerge. Great Poem!
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I thought about how much I love butterflies and their
symbolism. I visualized butterflies and how they emerge. Great Poem!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
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thank you harmony :-)
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, there's something wonderful about about beauty emerging from something that is fairly ordinary, if I was to describe rebirth, it would be in exactly that way. Beautifully written, blessings Roy,
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Oh yes indeed, there's something wonderful about about beauty emerging from something that is fairly ordinary, if I was to describe rebirth, it would be in exactly that way. Beautifully written, blessings Roy,
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thank you roy :-)
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Most welcome
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written lune poem. The whole process of emerging from a caterpillar into a butterfly totally amazes me. Love this one. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written lune poem. The whole process of emerging from a caterpillar into a butterfly totally amazes me. Love this one. Good luck in the contest.
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thank you joanne :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the
change from caterpillar to butterfly.
-A very good concluding line shows
the beauty that transforms in the process.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the
change from caterpillar to butterfly.
-A very good concluding line shows
the beauty that transforms in the process.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
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thank you pam :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Perfect! This tells the tale of the caterpillar through to his emergence into a butterfly. They are incredible creatures and probably the only one who is the perfect Cinderella. The scullery maid to a princess. Loved this, well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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Perfect! This tells the tale of the caterpillar through to his emergence into a butterfly. They are incredible creatures and probably the only one who is the perfect Cinderella. The scullery maid to a princess. Loved this, well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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thank you sandra :)
Comment from Gee
This is a wonderful entry in the lune contest.
My only suggestion would be to post a butterfly picture with the poem.
I noticed poems with pictures do better in the contest.
But a great poem in my opinion.
Thanks for sharing
Gee
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This is a wonderful entry in the lune contest.
My only suggestion would be to post a butterfly picture with the poem.
I noticed poems with pictures do better in the contest.
But a great poem in my opinion.
Thanks for sharing
Gee
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
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thank you gee :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Few words that describe a beautiful transformation here as a butterfly emerges into a world of flight, much enjoyed, a wonderful scene described, love Dolly x
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Few words that describe a beautiful transformation here as a butterfly emerges into a world of flight, much enjoyed, a wonderful scene described, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
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thank you dolly :-)