These words I write
A prayer -56 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Roy this has to be one of your very best. It's a clear and powerful testimony to God's work in your life, written in the form of a prayer of praise and sure hope. Well done. Blessings to you.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Roy this has to be one of your very best. It's a clear and powerful testimony to God's work in your life, written in the form of a prayer of praise and sure hope. Well done. Blessings to you.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Wendy, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from Sanku
I am very impressed by the lines,'may the words my pen would write/be as a stream of light and grace'-what beautiful thought .The lines that followed are of deep faith and joy of knowing GOD.I wish and pray that you would always keep that joy.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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I am very impressed by the lines,'may the words my pen would write/be as a stream of light and grace'-what beautiful thought .The lines that followed are of deep faith and joy of knowing GOD.I wish and pray that you would always keep that joy.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks Sanku, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This seems to be a reflective write, thinking of the days of dark despair to now, with His grace and care walking with you each day. Much emotion in your words Roy, hope all is well with you and yours. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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This seems to be a reflective write, thinking of the days of dark despair to now, with His grace and care walking with you each day. Much emotion in your words Roy, hope all is well with you and yours. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks Valda, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from Rebel Jim
Roy I am SO lmpressed... All of your words and punctuations are SPOT on!
(as far as I'm concerned)... GOD be with you ALWAYS, you and yours!
My compliments... Keep them coming!!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Roy I am SO lmpressed... All of your words and punctuations are SPOT on!
(as far as I'm concerned)... GOD be with you ALWAYS, you and yours!
My compliments... Keep them coming!!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Jim, for these terrific comments and wonderful review and stars,blessings Roy
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Well deserved, my Friend!
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Well deserved, my Friend!
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Thanks Jim
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
The opening couplet starts this glorious piece off with a bang!
meter is off (10 syllables vs 8) below:
and not on earth-bound temporal schemes.
sugg: not on earth-bound temp'ral schemes.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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The opening couplet starts this glorious piece off with a bang!
meter is off (10 syllables vs 8) below:
and not on earth-bound temporal schemes.
sugg: not on earth-bound temp'ral schemes.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Liz, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write about your own personal beliefs and your experience with divine help you received. I wonder if you were ever exposed to faith at a young age or ever went to Sunday school? Often we are very young when we are taught to believe and worship, I went to a church school and my Grandchildren also attend. Fine well rhymed words here Roy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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A faithful write about your own personal beliefs and your experience with divine help you received. I wonder if you were ever exposed to faith at a young age or ever went to Sunday school? Often we are very young when we are taught to believe and worship, I went to a church school and my Grandchildren also attend. Fine well rhymed words here Roy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Dolly, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully written, deeply reverent poem conveys a powerful message
about how having a personal relationship with the Lord changes a person and leads to peace and joy.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Your skillfully written, deeply reverent poem conveys a powerful message
about how having a personal relationship with the Lord changes a person and leads to peace and joy.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Janice, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well composed and thoughtful spiritual poem that focuses on the hope that may be provided through a relationship with God.
Nice job. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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A well composed and thoughtful spiritual poem that focuses on the hope that may be provided through a relationship with God.
Nice job. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Sharon, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree, Roy. It is impossible to put words to the feeling that comes from knowing the Lord. Until one, as you experienced, does, s/he will never know the joy and love you eloquently express in your prayer. I enjoyed reading this. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes, and a true meaningful message for all.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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I agree, Roy. It is impossible to put words to the feeling that comes from knowing the Lord. Until one, as you experienced, does, s/he will never know the joy and love you eloquently express in your prayer. I enjoyed reading this. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes, and a true meaningful message for all.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Jan, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from kahpot
Wow! "selfless, lent " in the way you have used these words (and others) you have reminded us that we are only borrowing/visiting this place for a short time, and should always be thankful what He bestowed us, an exceptional read and very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Wow! "selfless, lent " in the way you have used these words (and others) you have reminded us that we are only borrowing/visiting this place for a short time, and should always be thankful what He bestowed us, an exceptional read and very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Kimbob, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy