Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Roy,

Goodness, this poetry form seems complicated! I cannot even pronounce it :-)

Triple-Heptastich? You followed all the rules well in your well penned poem.

It is really beautiful, Roy. Thank you for this uplifting poem this morning!

Senyai

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Senyai, for these super comments and terrific review, blessings Roy

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This Triple-Heptastich is an interesting poetry form with which you have created a wonderful poem. Our creator is so far above us in wisdom and we can never hope to understand in this realm the wisdom of his ways. He gives us the knowledge and wisdom we need to rely on him to do the rest.
Thinking we are wise enough to question God is futile.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Beth, for these super comments and terrific review, blessings Roy

Comment from RPSaxena

Excellent

Hello Roy,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
2nd stanza is particularly noteworthy.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks so much RP, for these super comments and terrific review, blessings Roy

reply by RPSaxena on 18-Jul-2021

Roy, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Roy,

This reminds me of the conversation between Job and God. Were you there when I stretched out the heavens or hung the stars? In other words, who are you to question anything I do, or think, or say, right? God is God and His ways are far above and beyond our ways.

A beautiful message, sweet friend.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Robyn, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

good morning, Roy!

Your poem gives the reader much to ponder... Good thoughts to take to heart. If God made us all equal and he valued our worth as we are.... why is it he gave us the choice to take the road of struggle and perfection to only learn that if we accepted our Lord with all our heart...perfection was already ours. Our freedom was/is a learning path... because learning and trusting in our beliefs might be a stronger foundation than just having it given to us without knowing the consequences. I rattle on with my thoughts...sorry! I hope some of it makes sense. You stirred my mind!

Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Your thoughts are precious, I enjoy my young grandchildren?s enthusiastic and original view of life, love and meaning, I just sit there drinking in their beauty, how much more God. Thank you Carol, blessings Roy

Comment from MAMONIA

Exceptional

I am thoroughly impressed by this wonderful write. I love the way your words flow with such rhythm.
This looks like a difficult type of poem to accomplish as I have never seen the name Triple-Heptastich before.
There is a definite depth and inner workings in this piece and I can appreciate the talent it took to write it,
Best of luck,
Marie

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

I just invented it, Thanks Maria, for these wonderful comments and excellent review and stars, blessings Roy

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Paths flow blind.. ", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Duchess, for these super comments and terrific review, blessings Roy

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

I liked the thought-provoking poem. Wisdom is a great source of power. It's through others' stories of failure and success that we learn the most. There is little in life that a wise mind can't conquer. Much enjoyed. I wish I had a six to award.Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Seshadri, , for these super comments and terrific review, blessings Roy

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Cain slew Abel, his brother. Beneath the ground, his blood moaned the results. God, in all of His wisdom and love, hears,
Is this the first stage of immunity? We see and feel wars, a lesson yet to learn, or is it a path toward maturity? Love your poem. It brings much thought to the wise, to the simple. They will never know. And the beat goes on!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks Ben for these great comments and a lovely review blessings Roy

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Hi Roy
Firstly, I'm sorry I dont have a six for you. This is sure deserving of one.
This sou fs a bit complicated and you handled it like a pro.
Your terameter is spot on so it flows beautifully.
This is my favorite...
"This maze, my mind, this shallow sea,
will never know how grows a tree."

Such an amazing poem. Thanks for writing it.
Katiemae

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks KatieMae for these great comments and a lovely review blessings Roy