The Friendship Fence
Remembering my dear friend, Lois44 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I'm happy for your, amada, that you have treasured memories of your dear friend. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your words were well-chosen with great imagery of you and your friend enjoying each other's friendship and life over the fence. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I'm happy for your, amada, that you have treasured memories of your dear friend. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your words were well-chosen with great imagery of you and your friend enjoying each other's friendship and life over the fence. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Jan. Your kind support to my work is always so appreciated.
Comment from Gloria ....
Beautiful true-story of companionship and the simple joys shared between neighbours and friends. The blueberry pie sounds absolutely delicious and I can imagine you shared many peaceful hours. You must miss her even though the space still glows like a celestial hello.
I wish you great luck with the Committee. They have their work cut out for them this time. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Beautiful true-story of companionship and the simple joys shared between neighbours and friends. The blueberry pie sounds absolutely delicious and I can imagine you shared many peaceful hours. You must miss her even though the space still glows like a celestial hello.
I wish you great luck with the Committee. They have their work cut out for them this time. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Hi Gloria, I am delighted for your gracious comments.
Comment from lyenochka
What a beautiful memory of your wonderful neighbor. That's so rare these days. It shows me that you were a good neighbor in return. Loved that the fence that usually divides homes, became a place that "glows like a celestial hello," as your friend's spirit reminds you of that first encounter. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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What a beautiful memory of your wonderful neighbor. That's so rare these days. It shows me that you were a good neighbor in return. Loved that the fence that usually divides homes, became a place that "glows like a celestial hello," as your friend's spirit reminds you of that first encounter. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, dear Helen.
Comment from Jimmy Hogg
Great stuff, tidy, succinct. It's very difficult to convey so much in so few words, but you've done it well here, focusing on a few simple details. Not much I'd change at all- maybe I just want to know more.
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Great stuff, tidy, succinct. It's very difficult to convey so much in so few words, but you've done it well here, focusing on a few simple details. Not much I'd change at all- maybe I just want to know more.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your great comments, Jimmy. It is a compliment that we would like to read more. My portfolio is wide open to read more... Thanks!l