My Lil' Dude
My 1978 Volkswagen Rabbit -- A Shape* Poem for LisaMay35 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette. Now you've gone way too far. You made a poem look like a car. What is a slow thinker like me supposed to do? I can't do it. I give up. That's really really cool. That's quite creative. I like it. Z
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hey Yvette. Now you've gone way too far. You made a poem look like a car. What is a slow thinker like me supposed to do? I can't do it. I give up. That's really really cool. That's quite creative. I like it. Z
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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LOL! You always managed to make me smile, Z! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed my reminiscing about my Lil' Dude, sir -- twas fun and challenging! ;) Take care and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What an amazing presentation Yvette! The shape is perfect for your car and your words made me smile, a clever and fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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What an amazing presentation Yvette! The shape is perfect for your car and your words made me smile, a clever and fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hooray!! :) I'm so very glad you enjoyed my reminiscing about my Lil' Dude, Dolly -- he and I went through a lot of growing up together!! ;) ;) Take care and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Debbie Pope
Impressive, Yvette. You are always up to a challenge. You seem to thrive on them. I think that the green suits you well. Your poem made me miss my high school days in my Rambler Rebel and it makes me wonder about those secrets. I bet you were an outrageous teenager.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Impressive, Yvette. You are always up to a challenge. You seem to thrive on them. I think that the green suits you well. Your poem made me miss my high school days in my Rambler Rebel and it makes me wonder about those secrets. I bet you were an outrageous teenager.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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LOL -- oh, I was a complete mess in high school and still managed to keep the grades up to get my scholarship!! ;) ;) Of course, scholarships were not as plentiful back then...LOL! ;) ;) I'm so very glad you enjoyed my reminiscing about my Lil' Dude, MQ -- he and I went through a lot of growing up together!! ;) ;) Take care and have a great weekend, my friend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I'm sorry, I have used all my six stars. This certainly deserves one. I am fascinated by the way you shaped your poem into a car. I haven't seen this design before. Very clever and good work.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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I'm sorry, I have used all my six stars. This certainly deserves one. I am fascinated by the way you shaped your poem into a car. I haven't seen this design before. Very clever and good work.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed my reminiscing about my Lil' Dude, Willie -- he and I went through a lot of growing up together!! You should give the 'shape' thing a try -- I'd love to see it! ;) ;) Take care and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Clever shape poem. I have a green car, too, approximately the shade as the car you pay homage to. "Blasting the tunes to stay awake" is definitely a relatable line among many others. I had to read "never so fluffy as your namesake" three times before I got, oh Volkswagen Rabbit. Thank you for sharing.
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Clever shape poem. I have a green car, too, approximately the shade as the car you pay homage to. "Blasting the tunes to stay awake" is definitely a relatable line among many others. I had to read "never so fluffy as your namesake" three times before I got, oh Volkswagen Rabbit. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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LOL -- glad you got the 'rabbit' reference! ;) ;) And I'm so very glad you enjoyed my reminiscing about my Lil' Dude -- he and I went through a lot of growing up together!! ;) ;) Take care and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette