Do You Snore?
a bored mind roams59 total reviews
Comment from CathyM
lol what a tease she is. I gave a little chuckle. My favorite line...I'll pick a clover as I bend over...loved it. Your artwork chosen was spot on too. Nice job.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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lol what a tease she is. I gave a little chuckle. My favorite line...I'll pick a clover as I bend over...loved it. Your artwork chosen was spot on too. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello victor,
The title had me thinking this poem was about snoring. When I saw the picture I wondered if we were going to learn that Marilyn Monroe snored. My daughter wears earplugs to bed because her husband snores really loud.
So I guess the husband snoring sent this wife in search of the neighbor to seduce him because she couldn't sleep. Interesting. I can see it happening.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hello victor,
The title had me thinking this poem was about snoring. When I saw the picture I wondered if we were going to learn that Marilyn Monroe snored. My daughter wears earplugs to bed because her husband snores really loud.
So I guess the husband snoring sent this wife in search of the neighbor to seduce him because she couldn't sleep. Interesting. I can see it happening.
Joy xx
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Yes, so can I.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about snoring that make you miss out about the dreaming thoughts of the wife you just snored awake, and she make plans in her mind with the neighbor who may not snore.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about snoring that make you miss out about the dreaming thoughts of the wife you just snored awake, and she make plans in her mind with the neighbor who may not snore.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Yup. Could happen. Thank you.
Comment from Cedar
Hello Victor: Yes, I do snore. So bad that my wife moved into the guest bedroom.
But, if I was laying beside that beautiful "hot" woman in this picture I wouldn't sleep enough to snore...Bill
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hello Victor: Yes, I do snore. So bad that my wife moved into the guest bedroom.
But, if I was laying beside that beautiful "hot" woman in this picture I wouldn't sleep enough to snore...Bill
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Ha ha, Me neither.
Comment from robyn corum
Victor,
Sooo... mischievous wife is a bit bored with her snoring boring hubby and is having thoughts - only thoughts, I hope - of what she COULD do. nice.
One small comment - I realize this is a form of dialogue, but it really should be 'lie' instead of 'lay'
Thanks!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Victor,
Sooo... mischievous wife is a bit bored with her snoring boring hubby and is having thoughts - only thoughts, I hope - of what she COULD do. nice.
One small comment - I realize this is a form of dialogue, but it really should be 'lie' instead of 'lay'
Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Tess Stavenski
I had to read your poem because it made me think about my husband who snores terribly!! Even if they snore, I think we all enjoy spending time with the one we love!
Thanks for sharing! Nicely written!
Tess
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I had to read your poem because it made me think about my husband who snores terribly!! Even if they snore, I think we all enjoy spending time with the one we love!
Thanks for sharing! Nicely written!
Tess
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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But, of course. Thank you. Doug
Comment from kiwijenny
My husband is snoring'
Into drums he is boring
I'll dream of exploring
Planting lips imploring
I love the picture ..Marilyn adoring
This poem is what yours brought about
God bless
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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My husband is snoring'
Into drums he is boring
I'll dream of exploring
Planting lips imploring
I love the picture ..Marilyn adoring
This poem is what yours brought about
God bless
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Smile. Thank you.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Victor... the answer is a resounding YES! I get it from my mother... my son gets it from me... I knew he was mine when they laid him in my arms and he snored. LOL :)
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hello Victor... the answer is a resounding YES! I get it from my mother... my son gets it from me... I knew he was mine when they laid him in my arms and he snored. LOL :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from LynSys
A beautiful picture to go with a very seductive poem...leads your imagination to every place with your words.
Very well written, Victor. "Recognized" award most deserved ;o)
Lynda
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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A beautiful picture to go with a very seductive poem...leads your imagination to every place with your words.
Very well written, Victor. "Recognized" award most deserved ;o)
Lynda
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Lynda.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Of course, you snore!! Doesn't everyone? Fortunately for me, both my hubby and I snore and over the years, it has become part of the sounds of the night. So, I'm not too worried about him laying there fantasizing about the neighbor.
Thank you for sharing,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hi there,
Of course, you snore!! Doesn't everyone? Fortunately for me, both my hubby and I snore and over the years, it has become part of the sounds of the night. So, I'm not too worried about him laying there fantasizing about the neighbor.
Thank you for sharing,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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He he. Thank you.