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Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
This is a good poem. I kind of feel it is a bit all over the place. A lot of great things but the flow wasn't as smooth for me personally.
Thank you so much for sharing. Our relationship with God reflects in how we live!
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This is a good poem. I kind of feel it is a bit all over the place. A lot of great things but the flow wasn't as smooth for me personally.
Thank you so much for sharing. Our relationship with God reflects in how we live!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from WryWriter
Acrostic: first letter each line spelling out title. I really liked the message of this poem. To trust and ask God for guidance in all our daily living. How much better the world would be if all practiced this.
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Acrostic: first letter each line spelling out title. I really liked the message of this poem. To trust and ask God for guidance in all our daily living. How much better the world would be if all practiced this.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Walk, Talk with God And Guide Us Living", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Walk, Talk with God And Guide Us Living", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Hi Alcreator - I enjoyed this acrostic and your variation of this writing. This was a good reminder. It was a solid statement for each letter that encompassed each word that was set apart by each of the words you used in your title. Very well prepared and also well executed. I enjoyed the message as well. Blessings and Cheers, Fonda
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Hi Alcreator - I enjoyed this acrostic and your variation of this writing. This was a good reminder. It was a solid statement for each letter that encompassed each word that was set apart by each of the words you used in your title. Very well prepared and also well executed. I enjoyed the message as well. Blessings and Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
Which is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last Your message is the truth and on point
thank you for sharing
And have a safe , blessed week-end
cookie
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
Which is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last Your message is the truth and on point
thank you for sharing
And have a safe , blessed week-end
cookie
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Sanku
God has gifted with temporary homes here .that is an essential Hindu thought .yet we do not remember it. we think we are Gods, enjoying special rights . but our arrogance will teach us a lesson one day
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God has gifted with temporary homes here .that is an essential Hindu thought .yet we do not remember it. we think we are Gods, enjoying special rights . but our arrogance will teach us a lesson one day
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is an excellent entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest. Well constructed, it holds the reader's attention by using poetic tools such as, vivid imagery, to convey the content in a thought provoking and entertaining manner. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This is an excellent entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest. Well constructed, it holds the reader's attention by using poetic tools such as, vivid imagery, to convey the content in a thought provoking and entertaining manner. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from JLR
I would have given a six, however, this length Acrostic is what it is, I think it would be very helpful to the reader to make the first letter BOLD and perhaps 1 type face larger for the reader to stay on awareness that this is a wonderful Acrostic free verse poem....
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I would have given a six, however, this length Acrostic is what it is, I think it would be very helpful to the reader to make the first letter BOLD and perhaps 1 type face larger for the reader to stay on awareness that this is a wonderful Acrostic free verse poem....
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Habib Oke
Really wonderful. You have managed well to obey the rules. Seriously the requirements are really kind of hard to comply with. However you have perfectly fulfilled them. You are indeed a brilliant guru. Best of luck in the contest.
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Really wonderful. You have managed well to obey the rules. Seriously the requirements are really kind of hard to comply with. However you have perfectly fulfilled them. You are indeed a brilliant guru. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed another of your acrostics in free verse. Thank you for counting the repetitions for me and pointing out that "Knowledge is not enough"! Here's to "practicing humanity"! Have a peaceful weekend- Joan
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I enjoyed another of your acrostics in free verse. Thank you for counting the repetitions for me and pointing out that "Knowledge is not enough"! Here's to "practicing humanity"! Have a peaceful weekend- Joan
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
